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6/24/2018 c1 Nargelz
No offence it just all seems awkward
1/19/2016 c1 Guest
hahaaha this story is funny and cute (despite the many spelling errors!)
:-)
8/14/2014 c1 1AdventuresInTheSueniverse
This is bad. I'm sorry, but it just is.
First off; you have Sirius paired with someone WAY younger then him,
second; the grammar is TERRIBLE,
third; the dialect is confusing and boring,
and fourth; what's with that line where Sirius says that he has been in love with Bella since he held her in his arms when she was a baby? Wouldn't that make him a pedophile? SIRIUS IS NOT A PEDOPHILE!
12/6/2013 c1 Guest
What did I just read? None of it makes any sense and is it a play because it seems like it the way it is written and the grammar is horrible
1/21/2013 c1 14Love Faith Embers
Is this the same story as the other one I saw and reviewed for? Why didn't you put it with that one? Also, this looks more like a role-play than a story. :(
1/18/2013 c1 13MrsJohnnyDepp Jack Sparrow
wow
1/16/2013 c1 16Child of Dreams
(growls)
Didn't you already post this MONTHS ago?

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