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7/6/2017 c4 LillyTigress
reading this for the umpteenth time and being very amused at you pointing out the lack-luster response the story got early on. Now there are literally several thousand people who consider this one of their favorite stories - i guess i (and many, many others) should be grateful that you kept going even before you knew how much your story would be loved. i hope this inspires other writers to hang in there because sometimes the public is woefully slow to respond. thanks.
7/5/2017 c2 icecold1039
Sakura's maturity seems forced, and I actually like some Sakura fics but this seems really forced.
7/5/2017 c18 Tony McNucklz
Great news for those who like myself cannot stomach the alternate dimensional hooplah: it appears to have zero effect on the ongoing story so skipping it all seems to not rob you of any necessary information.
Bad news: the ongoing story consists of one chapter. and from the 2.5 years ago update date, this story is probably dead. darn it.
despite the wormhole fiasco, I highly recommend this story. very good mechanics and an refreshingly uncommon character build/inter-personal dynamic for team 7. I sincerely hope the author comes back to it.
7/5/2017 c17 Tony McNucklz
A warning to anyone who reads this: there will be a point where dimension hoping malarkey happens in the middle of the story. it is 7 chapters of bogus uninspired nonsensical blahblah that takes a well thought out and immersive story and shits all over what you were formerly riveted by. I tried multiple times to slog through it but just could not get over the blatant illogical mindfuck it inflicted on me. I'm reading stories here to AVOID canon, but apparently in this the alternate interesting characters meet the canon idiots. my recommendation is to skip everything that happens in the alternate world and start again in the aftermath.
seriously this story was so good until the metaphorical monster truck did a 50 foot jump over the metaphorical shark. argh. well hopefully the chapter after the alternate crap makes sense.
7/2/2017 c15 2Dhea30
I had always hated Sandaime Hokage no matter of he is seen as grandfatherly figure for Naruto of not. Seriously, he preach about caring the whole village, and then let the one whose life was sacrificed to host the Kyuubi suffer? Is that justice or is that his own petty revenge, huh?
6/26/2017 c18 Guest
I really really love your work! Pls do continue if u have the time
6/9/2017 c1 Ellis
Hey, not sure if you'll ever read this, as it's been quite a while since this was last updated, but this is really interesting, primarily because you're a good writer. I mean, it helps that you're starting from an interesting premise, and you're not just regurgitating canon, even for the bits you're leaving basically the same. But when it comes down to it, your writing has that extra something that really lets me get in to the story, to want to know what happens next.
6/8/2017 c2 FatigueMakesMeTired
That last line has me in tears. Wonderful. I love a competent Sakura. She becomes one of the bet characters. Thank you for writing.
6/6/2017 c12 thedizzleman
I now wish to read a spin-off that features Kakashi the porn distributor and voice of the great prophet Jirayia.
5/17/2017 c5 punin10ded
The simple grammar is perfect! Don't worry 'bout it and continue writing!
4/11/2017 c18 lunamoon531
I really love this story! It pulls me in and doesn't let go of me until the end 3

Please update soon! I can't wait for whatever happens next!

Love,

Lunamoon~
3/27/2017 c2 5QueenArla
Well, this is certainly a different take on the Uzumaki-Uchiha rivalry. I think I like it.
3/6/2017 c18 1lolistarkiller
Omfg I just read your entire fanfic in one sitting and am defensively craving more! Please my friend if you are still alive I beg you to update!
2/28/2017 c18 death390
Love the premise interesting use of dimension hopping hope to see more even know this hasn't been updated in more than a year
2/26/2017 c18 Guest
Interesting story please continue it
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