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1/17/2013 c1 krad09
not bad at all, if this is your first attempt at a "serious" naruto story, then I'm quite impressed, that you didn't make Sasuke emo-like is a plus
1/17/2013 c1 nan
oh wow.. where to begin
I've been reading Naruto fic for a long time now on but honestly this is a totaly new storyline. Didn't think that someone could pull a new plot off.

I like that the younger Naruto is not shouting round is somehow mysterious and that it's Sasuke for once trying to figure him out.

Hope you don't leave it just at this chapter and continue this fic. I'm really looking forward for the rest of your story.
1/17/2013 c1 Guest
This was extremely good! I can't wait till you write more. The writing was good and so is the idea. I have no complaints. I hope you decide to update soon
1/17/2013 c1 ahgndouity
Interesting story. Im very much looking forward to seeing how this progresses
1/17/2013 c1 McKazekage
This is really good! I like the idea and I enjoy the Hinata sponge comment :P
1/16/2013 c1 4DBZFTW
I enjoyed the first chapter and I like how you portrayed Naruto. Keep up the good work.
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