for Here Lie the Shadows6/11/2013 c4 AiLeiben
That. Was. Terrifying. Yeah. But really awesome(?)! Keep updating pretty pretty please!
That. Was. Terrifying. Yeah. But really awesome(?)! Keep updating pretty pretty please!
6/11/2013 c3 AiLeiben
I love the poem in italics before and after the chapter. So scary! You're such a good author! You are now, like, my writing inspiration! XD
I love the poem in italics before and after the chapter. So scary! You're such a good author! You are now, like, my writing inspiration! XD
6/11/2013 c2 AiLeiben
Omigosh. That scared me. I loved the story Lukas told. This is awesome! Although, I'm kinda scared now! DUN'T DIE!
Omigosh. That scared me. I loved the story Lukas told. This is awesome! Although, I'm kinda scared now! DUN'T DIE!
5/20/2013 c4 no name
Updaaaate! Please?
Updaaaate! Please?
3/1/2013 c3 
7Dalasport
Woah! Your writing is so professional! And the story is no different! It's so captivating and I didn't stop reading till I reached the last published chapter. I'm looking forward to reading your next one !
7DalasportWoah! Your writing is so professional! And the story is no different! It's so captivating and I didn't stop reading till I reached the last published chapter. I'm looking forward to reading your next one !
2/27/2013 c3 Guest
You have no idea how happy i was when i found out you have updated this story.
Of course, this chapter is just as good as the two previous ones. I just like Everything in it!
Good job! This is a truly captivating story.
You have no idea how happy i was when i found out you have updated this story.
Of course, this chapter is just as good as the two previous ones. I just like Everything in it!
Good job! This is a truly captivating story.
1/28/2013 c2 midnight.sun
Oh my...it's been a pretty long time since i've last found a story as good as this one..
I just couldn't stop reading, and i was really kinda disappointed when i finished the second chapter. Too bad there wasn't a third one :P
Aniway, great piece of work and keep on going. i'm looking forward for the next chapter! :D
P.S.: i absolutely loved the Star Wars reference...after all, it's my all times favorite film! XD
Oh my...it's been a pretty long time since i've last found a story as good as this one..
I just couldn't stop reading, and i was really kinda disappointed when i finished the second chapter. Too bad there wasn't a third one :P
Aniway, great piece of work and keep on going. i'm looking forward for the next chapter! :D
P.S.: i absolutely loved the Star Wars reference...after all, it's my all times favorite film! XD
1/23/2013 c2 2Hobo From Across The Street
Good Lord! It's only the second chapter and I'm already hooked! Horror is usually the genre most authors have a difficult time with,but at the very beginning you've managed to create a submersive scene which I could actually picture as some sort of scene in a movie. Your writing style sounds formal and mature,which definitely helps the story flow. Please,update soon!
2Hobo From Across The StreetGood Lord! It's only the second chapter and I'm already hooked! Horror is usually the genre most authors have a difficult time with,but at the very beginning you've managed to create a submersive scene which I could actually picture as some sort of scene in a movie. Your writing style sounds formal and mature,which definitely helps the story flow. Please,update soon!
1/17/2013 c1 7Timeless Wings
Wow.. I love how the story is going. Nice flow, intriguing plot.
... OMF, I sound so serious. XD but update soon!
7Timeless WingsWow.. I love how the story is going. Nice flow, intriguing plot.
... OMF, I sound so serious. XD but update soon!