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58Starway Man
Well, this was pretty intense, the slaughter of that family by Vamp Connor and Vamp Dawn, and it was an okay scene at the end between Lindsey and Eve. Hope you update again soon!
58Starway ManWell, this was pretty intense, the slaughter of that family by Vamp Connor and Vamp Dawn, and it was an okay scene at the end between Lindsey and Eve. Hope you update again soon!
3/3/2016 c13 Starway Man
Some interesting conversation and subtle power plays in this one, you get the feeling the resurrected Master won't last long - and Justine's a Slayer now? Should be an interesting showdown between her and Spike, can't wait to see it!
Some interesting conversation and subtle power plays in this one, you get the feeling the resurrected Master won't last long - and Justine's a Slayer now? Should be an interesting showdown between her and Spike, can't wait to see it!
2/15/2016 c11 Starway Man
Nice battle scene between vamp Connor and Justine, and some classic comments from Vamp Dawn too. Looking forward to what happens next, now that Angel and Buffy are there on the scene.
Nice battle scene between vamp Connor and Justine, and some classic comments from Vamp Dawn too. Looking forward to what happens next, now that Angel and Buffy are there on the scene.
2/9/2016 c10 1Bigreader95
Love the story! I also love the possibility of Angel completing the Shamshu and getting to be with Buffy.
1Bigreader95Love the story! I also love the possibility of Angel completing the Shamshu and getting to be with Buffy.
2/7/2016 c10 58Starway Man
Nice cameo by Cordelia, but you need to be careful differentiating between 'mum' and 'mom' for British and American speakers. The best line in my view was Spike thinking that "the idea off Angelus's hell spawn now shacking up with his nibblet was not sitting well with him", without a doubt.
58Starway ManNice cameo by Cordelia, but you need to be careful differentiating between 'mum' and 'mom' for British and American speakers. The best line in my view was Spike thinking that "the idea off Angelus's hell spawn now shacking up with his nibblet was not sitting well with him", without a doubt.
1/31/2016 c9 Starway Man
Thanks for the new chapter, I especially loved Giles going all "Children, please!" towards the end. Hope you update again soon!
Thanks for the new chapter, I especially loved Giles going all "Children, please!" towards the end. Hope you update again soon!
4/7/2013 c8 29Angel's blue eyed girl
What an interesting fic, David! Love all the action. Having Angelus sire Connor is just pure evil. I was eagerly awaiting Angel seeing Buffy again. I hope you incorporate a little more Buffy/Angel (just the two of them) into this fic. I still love thet couple. If you ever want any help maybe bumping this to an M-I'd be willing to write a little smut scene for them for you. ;)
Anyhow, I like where you seem to be taking this.
Jenna
29Angel's blue eyed girlWhat an interesting fic, David! Love all the action. Having Angelus sire Connor is just pure evil. I was eagerly awaiting Angel seeing Buffy again. I hope you incorporate a little more Buffy/Angel (just the two of them) into this fic. I still love thet couple. If you ever want any help maybe bumping this to an M-I'd be willing to write a little smut scene for them for you. ;)
Anyhow, I like where you seem to be taking this.
Jenna
3/1/2013 c8 58Starway Man
Nice update, the Angel/Angelus fight ended in a draw, which I thought was okay. Andrew was typically annoying, and Xander seemed to have no problem believing Spike's evil again? His reaction to Angel was in-character too. Hmm, in this story Harris also thinks Dawn in the only one left who cares for him? That's...unusual. Betcha no one will deal well when Vamp Connor and Vamp Dawn show up either. More soon!
58Starway ManNice update, the Angel/Angelus fight ended in a draw, which I thought was okay. Andrew was typically annoying, and Xander seemed to have no problem believing Spike's evil again? His reaction to Angel was in-character too. Hmm, in this story Harris also thinks Dawn in the only one left who cares for him? That's...unusual. Betcha no one will deal well when Vamp Connor and Vamp Dawn show up either. More soon!
2/24/2013 c7 Starway Man
Hmm, so Connor and Dawn as vampires - that promises to be very hard for the white hats to deal with, as you said. The fight scene between Angel and Angelus was not too bad, and I assume it will be continued in the next chapter? I'm glad that the Scoobs have shown up too, of course. More soon!
Hmm, so Connor and Dawn as vampires - that promises to be very hard for the white hats to deal with, as you said. The fight scene between Angel and Angelus was not too bad, and I assume it will be continued in the next chapter? I'm glad that the Scoobs have shown up too, of course. More soon!
2/24/2013 c6 22Angellufy
Oh no! This is not going to be good! Why did they leave Buffy behind too? I mean. She will be a pissed off slayer.
22AngellufyOh no! This is not going to be good! Why did they leave Buffy behind too? I mean. She will be a pissed off slayer.
2/24/2013 c5 Angellufy
So, what now? Is Angel only human? Or just a shell of a person without the demon inside?
I hope Buffy can see through his facade if Angelus decides to go to her for any reason.
So, what now? Is Angel only human? Or just a shell of a person without the demon inside?
I hope Buffy can see through his facade if Angelus decides to go to her for any reason.
2/24/2013 c4 Angellufy
Hey, Illyria and Wes are around! Goooodyyyyy!
I hope Buffy kicks Spike's ass this time. A stake through the heart please! Illyria can take care of Gunn. He is as much guilt as Angel for Fred's death.
Hey, Illyria and Wes are around! Goooodyyyyy!
I hope Buffy kicks Spike's ass this time. A stake through the heart please! Illyria can take care of Gunn. He is as much guilt as Angel for Fred's death.