for Turning-Points7/2/2016 c37 
6razena
hi! It's me razena from devianart! I LOVE this series! Especially this chappie and the last one XD Hilarious :) Can you teach me japanese? Or is it Chinese? Cuz I really wanna lear :'( You don't have to if you want to though XD
6razenahi! It's me razena from devianart! I LOVE this series! Especially this chappie and the last one XD Hilarious :) Can you teach me japanese? Or is it Chinese? Cuz I really wanna lear :'( You don't have to if you want to though XD
12/19/2015 c49 4nanytefa1
Ya leí esta historia 2 veces y me sigue gustando,es realmente buena.
Eres una gran escritora :)
Lamento no haber comentado la primera vez que la leí.
4nanytefa1Ya leí esta historia 2 veces y me sigue gustando,es realmente buena.
Eres una gran escritora :)
Lamento no haber comentado la primera vez que la leí.
7/7/2015 c39 Guest
I know where that line came from, The Princess Bride. Funny movie!
I know where that line came from, The Princess Bride. Funny movie!
5/21/2015 c49 4EternityBlackRose21
Oh my God. This has totally inspired me for my story A Dragon's Memory! Thanks!
4EternityBlackRose21Oh my God. This has totally inspired me for my story A Dragon's Memory! Thanks!
2/20/2015 c49 1floraean
! *EXQUISITE WRITING ALERT* !
I've never read Ninjago fanfiction so well planned, so well written and so well ended like this. I read through all 49 chapters, and one night I didn't sleep a wink due to just reading and reading and oh my gosh! I loved the way you simply focused on building Cole and Arwyn's attraction by keeping them apart at first. I love how Cole focused on her safety before his own wants and needs. I love the sense of urgency and love between the entire team! Wow. I feel like I've just watched a live action movie with a bittersweet ending and after catching up to the updated point in Champion's Bane I'm literally on my knees begging for more! This has got to be my favorite Cole oriented story on this site so far! BRAVO ! :D
1floraean! *EXQUISITE WRITING ALERT* !
I've never read Ninjago fanfiction so well planned, so well written and so well ended like this. I read through all 49 chapters, and one night I didn't sleep a wink due to just reading and reading and oh my gosh! I loved the way you simply focused on building Cole and Arwyn's attraction by keeping them apart at first. I love how Cole focused on her safety before his own wants and needs. I love the sense of urgency and love between the entire team! Wow. I feel like I've just watched a live action movie with a bittersweet ending and after catching up to the updated point in Champion's Bane I'm literally on my knees begging for more! This has got to be my favorite Cole oriented story on this site so far! BRAVO ! :D
6/26/2014 c31 Guest
"Good God, Zane!" I slapped my palm against my forehead. "Is there a switch to turn that off once in a while?!"
XD LOL
"Good God, Zane!" I slapped my palm against my forehead. "Is there a switch to turn that off once in a while?!"
XD LOL
6/26/2014 c28 Guest
I loved the "three amigos" part XD
This part was one of my favorites tho:
Of course, when we got to the modern art section, our comments ranged from 'WTF?!' to 'I could do this with my feet!'.
I loved the "three amigos" part XD
This part was one of my favorites tho:
Of course, when we got to the modern art section, our comments ranged from 'WTF?!' to 'I could do this with my feet!'.
6/26/2014 c27 Guest
"Geez," came Kai's comment. "I feel like I'm on the last row in the theater at a chick flick! By myself!" I was still too busy recovering from Sofiya's maneuvers on my own person to be concerned about what was happening on the loveseat.
XD I LOVED IT
"Geez," came Kai's comment. "I feel like I'm on the last row in the theater at a chick flick! By myself!" I was still too busy recovering from Sofiya's maneuvers on my own person to be concerned about what was happening on the loveseat.
XD I LOVED IT
6/26/2014 c23 Guest
Behind me, I heard Jay say, "I will just die if Sensei walks out of there!"
LOL
Behind me, I heard Jay say, "I will just die if Sensei walks out of there!"
LOL
6/25/2014 c15 Guest
I couldn't understand how Nya and Jay found any opportunities to be alone around here. I guess that's why they got caught making out in the game room a lot. And the training rooms. And the bridge. Anyhoo…
XD LOL JAYA FOREVER LOVED THAT CHAPTER
Poor Jay they though he was having a dirty dream about Arwyn...
I couldn't understand how Nya and Jay found any opportunities to be alone around here. I guess that's why they got caught making out in the game room a lot. And the training rooms. And the bridge. Anyhoo…
XD LOL JAYA FOREVER LOVED THAT CHAPTER
Poor Jay they though he was having a dirty dream about Arwyn...
4/23/2014 c4 chocolateforever
Great chapter!
Great chapter!
4/15/2014 c14 anonymous23
Oh to live with the ninja...o
Oh to live with the ninja...o
4/5/2014 c30 EonstarII
LOVEIT! it's hilarious! She's really...a dude! :)
LOVEIT! it's hilarious! She's really...a dude! :)