4/12/2017 c7 danny
Is there going to be more
Is there going to be more
10/9/2016 c7 PsychoGurl
THIS IS SOOO GOOOOD! PLZ CONTINUE IT
THIS IS SOOO GOOOOD! PLZ CONTINUE IT
8/24/2016 c7 Master tipo
Please continue this story
Please continue this story
4/16/2016 c7 Kalifan12
I can't wait for you to update please update soon.
I can't wait for you to update please update soon.
1/23/2015 c7 Tigergirl713
Plz plz plz continue! This is one of the best stories I have ever read!
Plz plz plz continue! This is one of the best stories I have ever read!
1/10/2014 c7 GlenCoco
Ermergerd! Why is this not being continued, it's so good!
Ermergerd! Why is this not being continued, it's so good!
12/28/2013 c7 2Bat-phone
Cool update, but I'm confused about the name of the OC, is it Khàn? Or Zàn? Or maybe Zhàn? Please straight that out.
Cool update, but I'm confused about the name of the OC, is it Khàn? Or Zàn? Or maybe Zhàn? Please straight that out.
11/29/2013 c1 Guest
Good job
Good job
10/22/2013 c7 DonTheHero
This is an excellent story so far but, to make it better you should update it. I honestly do say it's an excellent story with some feelings of betrayal in the beginning, but I don't like how you ended in a cliffhanger and have not updated it in over a month. All I have left to say is good luck and keep up the excellent work!
Sincerely
DonTheHero
This is an excellent story so far but, to make it better you should update it. I honestly do say it's an excellent story with some feelings of betrayal in the beginning, but I don't like how you ended in a cliffhanger and have not updated it in over a month. All I have left to say is good luck and keep up the excellent work!
Sincerely
DonTheHero
9/5/2013 c7 Guest
Plz update soon! \(-)/
Plz update soon! \(-)/