for Gifted4/12 c79 Guest
I know I'm late but the way I would like to see bella and Leah sleep together, since rosalie is gone like how she slept with that other couple
I know I'm late but the way I would like to see bella and Leah sleep together, since rosalie is gone like how she slept with that other couple
1/11 c35 
26Bright Anarchy
I understand this story is completed however as of chpt 35 you asked what as a reader I thought would be appropriate to happen to Edward and what I thought of the relationships.
The relationship triangle I just put my suspension of disbelief blinders on and assume if they say they are happy, they are and it's no more complicated than that. It's fantasy Fanfiction.
Edward has really got a bum rap out of this. Bella waltzed in and he was forced out of the family. There has been zero focus in the story on Cullens trying to communicate with him in any positive or supportive way. They've done to Edward what Charlie did to Bella. The people Ed loves best in all the world suddenly agree he's a monster who belongs as far away from Bella as possible. Of course he's behaving like a confused, and angry moron. I would too if you ripped my world out from under me like that! I hope he gets a gentler end. One persons happiness shouldn't come at the price of another's.
Charlie ehh... I don't currently have any sympathy for him. Parenthood, family is supposed to be more than we've seen from him. When she's little acknowledge that she's different and help guide her to be her best self and maybe this whole story would have skipped the tragedy.
26Bright AnarchyI understand this story is completed however as of chpt 35 you asked what as a reader I thought would be appropriate to happen to Edward and what I thought of the relationships.
The relationship triangle I just put my suspension of disbelief blinders on and assume if they say they are happy, they are and it's no more complicated than that. It's fantasy Fanfiction.
Edward has really got a bum rap out of this. Bella waltzed in and he was forced out of the family. There has been zero focus in the story on Cullens trying to communicate with him in any positive or supportive way. They've done to Edward what Charlie did to Bella. The people Ed loves best in all the world suddenly agree he's a monster who belongs as far away from Bella as possible. Of course he's behaving like a confused, and angry moron. I would too if you ripped my world out from under me like that! I hope he gets a gentler end. One persons happiness shouldn't come at the price of another's.
Charlie ehh... I don't currently have any sympathy for him. Parenthood, family is supposed to be more than we've seen from him. When she's little acknowledge that she's different and help guide her to be her best self and maybe this whole story would have skipped the tragedy.
1/3 c33 DemonKittie25
Hi There.
I know you've had this story completed for some time and I'm not sure if you'll see this but I just wanted to let you know how this chapter affected me. It was so well written and I had the mix of heart flutters, tears in my eyes and smiling that Bella and Rose finally got to be together.
Hi There.
I know you've had this story completed for some time and I'm not sure if you'll see this but I just wanted to let you know how this chapter affected me. It was so well written and I had the mix of heart flutters, tears in my eyes and smiling that Bella and Rose finally got to be together.
10/6/2024 c91 1dessilicious
Ma’am you nees fo finish this or keep working on it. It is amazing, I never thought I’d be a fan of rosalie x bella. I’m loving all the relarionships in tbis story.
1dessiliciousMa’am you nees fo finish this or keep working on it. It is amazing, I never thought I’d be a fan of rosalie x bella. I’m loving all the relarionships in tbis story.
9/9/2024 c52 1AiyaKnight
edward is so 1 dimentional any only repeats his sentences like beating a dead horse. kinda lame. idk maybe im not seeing something.
1AiyaKnightedward is so 1 dimentional any only repeats his sentences like beating a dead horse. kinda lame. idk maybe im not seeing something.
9/8/2024 c28 AiyaKnight
Do you write as vague as you can because your chapters are short? Like its annoying and doesnt add any mystery.
Do you write as vague as you can because your chapters are short? Like its annoying and doesnt add any mystery.
9/8/2024 c21 AiyaKnight
i did the math. thats 3200 acres and you could see that from 50 miles away. bro it would look like a alien invasion apoclypse
i did the math. thats 3200 acres and you could see that from 50 miles away. bro it would look like a alien invasion apoclypse
9/8/2024 c20 AiyaKnight
you are telegraphing your tropes too hard. you need to let characters befriend thrmselves naturally. thats what made princesses story so good. instead here emmett has barely spent any time with bella and is all like ya she can date my wife np bella bear. like its so not organic.
you are telegraphing your tropes too hard. you need to let characters befriend thrmselves naturally. thats what made princesses story so good. instead here emmett has barely spent any time with bella and is all like ya she can date my wife np bella bear. like its so not organic.
9/8/2024 c5 AiyaKnight
you write so much but give little to know important info. 5 chapters in and i still have no clue what this vague shits about
you write so much but give little to know important info. 5 chapters in and i still have no clue what this vague shits about
7/16/2024 c91 alaraAzalea
Hello author hope you're doing fine. Hope you'll update soon and update the story for this story became one of the waited stories that I've read.
Hello author hope you're doing fine. Hope you'll update soon and update the story for this story became one of the waited stories that I've read.
7/5/2024 c91 boson98dan
It was definitely a 3 days ride reading this story.. A great read, mind you.
Even after so many years since you started this story - it can still capture new readers.
I hope you’re well and could spare yourself a time to continue this story, sometime in the future.
P.S. Spare poor Edward a redemption arc or, at least, some game for poor asshat :p
It was definitely a 3 days ride reading this story.. A great read, mind you.
Even after so many years since you started this story - it can still capture new readers.
I hope you’re well and could spare yourself a time to continue this story, sometime in the future.
P.S. Spare poor Edward a redemption arc or, at least, some game for poor asshat :p
6/19/2024 c91 masonallendra
I love this story and I love how they’re dynamic works to people being in love with only one person. Is it interesting dynamic that I love to see. I hope you continue along with the story.
I love this story and I love how they’re dynamic works to people being in love with only one person. Is it interesting dynamic that I love to see. I hope you continue along with the story.