12/27/2013 c1 ouraoracle87
great job really love the story keep up the great work

12/8/2013 c2 2animeblackcat11
I love it please update

7/29/2013 c2 6SymbolLuna
Aww, I love it!

7/24/2013 c2 poisoned sweetness
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6/26/2013 c1 Fire breather slayer
good

5/27/2013 c1 Mika 3
DX wheres the next chapter its rlly good!

2/21/2013 c1 Tombtiger
Oh! I cannot wait for the next chapter!

1/27/2013 c1 42Hita-Chan
Great job! Update soon please!