for The Promise3/14/2013 c2 
18Nightingale63
Wow. You really go into depth, showing how awful it is to be slushied, locker slammed, and then subjected to being in a dumpster full of smelly trash. It's amazing how strong Kurt really is, that he doesn't give up or just try not to be a target. He's strong, but his strength just isn't of the obvious sort.
I like how Finn is when he rescues him, and their conversation. Finn acknowledges past wrongdoing, and we see that he wants to do more.
Poor Kurt's day sounds so tiring; torture at school, then laundry and cooking, in addition to usual things like homework, presumably.
And that dream: it comes back to him, haunting as ever.
18Nightingale63Wow. You really go into depth, showing how awful it is to be slushied, locker slammed, and then subjected to being in a dumpster full of smelly trash. It's amazing how strong Kurt really is, that he doesn't give up or just try not to be a target. He's strong, but his strength just isn't of the obvious sort.
I like how Finn is when he rescues him, and their conversation. Finn acknowledges past wrongdoing, and we see that he wants to do more.
Poor Kurt's day sounds so tiring; torture at school, then laundry and cooking, in addition to usual things like homework, presumably.
And that dream: it comes back to him, haunting as ever.
3/14/2013 c1 Nightingale63
Great start! And Blaine is literally Kurt's teenage dream here (an interesting twist).
I like the realism of how you show Burt to be so hard-working, and also full of concern for his son. And perceptive: he puts two and two together, knows that the unexpected laundry is a sign. And he sees it that Kurt will probably have to leave Ohio to be happy in the long run; a thought that fills him with pain.
Kurt's dreams of Blaine? Intriguing, to say the least!
Great start! And Blaine is literally Kurt's teenage dream here (an interesting twist).
I like the realism of how you show Burt to be so hard-working, and also full of concern for his son. And perceptive: he puts two and two together, knows that the unexpected laundry is a sign. And he sees it that Kurt will probably have to leave Ohio to be happy in the long run; a thought that fills him with pain.
Kurt's dreams of Blaine? Intriguing, to say the least!
1/27/2013 c2 6Sofia Michelle
Wow! Love it! Does Blaine feel and dream te same dreams that Kurt dreams? More ASAP
6Sofia MichelleWow! Love it! Does Blaine feel and dream te same dreams that Kurt dreams? More ASAP