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12/26/2020 c1 Judith
sooooooo hard 2 read...
honestly, could've done better
11/15/2017 c1 5HpFangirl12778
it was good, but editing would be a good idea. And why twilight :(
2/27/2016 c1 Guest
Didnt make alot of sense. Plot holes, random things like, where did Bellatrix come from? Hard to follow, sorry. :(
9/8/2015 c1 14NarcissaMalfoy101
This was so random I loved it!
1/31/2015 c1 20Save yourself13
Do you know English?
And since when can two guys have kids... Not how that works love.
... I just can't. Sorry but no. And you reviewed your own story... That's really sad.
12/22/2014 c1 Scrutiny
Lord voldemort help us. This was a story? It wasn't in story format and it was like try to decode a message each line. Reviewing your own story? come on. The comment you put on wasn't even appropriate for the quality of the 'story'. Please get a beta, or learn to write.
10/4/2014 c1 3Riddle's diary
good work
3/21/2013 c1 Anonymous
Severus Snape's granny-panties...just STOP. This is not a story, and your summary is pathetic. And do stop reviewing your own horrid fics, that shows such juvenile behaviour on your part.
3/22/2013 c1 A Peck of Owls
Reviewing your own story for the sake of having a review? Rather pathetic...

Please, if you are going to bother posting at all, for the love of Merlin PLEASE take the effort to make your fic readable and well-written. This resembles more of a badly-written twitter role-play than an actual story.

Get a beta, or a family member to look over and fix this.
3/1/2013 c1 197Magi Silverwolf
Wow...just...wow...

Are you sure you want this posted?
1/23/2013 c1 13MrsJohnnyDepp Jack Sparrow
wow

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