for Sirius and Remus's daughter12/26/2020 c1 Judith
sooooooo hard 2 read...
honestly, could've done better
sooooooo hard 2 read...
honestly, could've done better
2/27/2016 c1 Guest
Didnt make alot of sense. Plot holes, random things like, where did Bellatrix come from? Hard to follow, sorry. :(
Didnt make alot of sense. Plot holes, random things like, where did Bellatrix come from? Hard to follow, sorry. :(
1/31/2015 c1 
20Save yourself13
Do you know English?
And since when can two guys have kids... Not how that works love.
... I just can't. Sorry but no. And you reviewed your own story... That's really sad.
20Save yourself13Do you know English?
And since when can two guys have kids... Not how that works love.
... I just can't. Sorry but no. And you reviewed your own story... That's really sad.
12/22/2014 c1 Scrutiny
Lord voldemort help us. This was a story? It wasn't in story format and it was like try to decode a message each line. Reviewing your own story? come on. The comment you put on wasn't even appropriate for the quality of the 'story'. Please get a beta, or learn to write.
Lord voldemort help us. This was a story? It wasn't in story format and it was like try to decode a message each line. Reviewing your own story? come on. The comment you put on wasn't even appropriate for the quality of the 'story'. Please get a beta, or learn to write.
3/21/2013 c1 Anonymous
Severus Snape's granny-panties...just STOP. This is not a story, and your summary is pathetic. And do stop reviewing your own horrid fics, that shows such juvenile behaviour on your part.
Severus Snape's granny-panties...just STOP. This is not a story, and your summary is pathetic. And do stop reviewing your own horrid fics, that shows such juvenile behaviour on your part.
3/22/2013 c1 A Peck of Owls
Reviewing your own story for the sake of having a review? Rather pathetic...
Please, if you are going to bother posting at all, for the love of Merlin PLEASE take the effort to make your fic readable and well-written. This resembles more of a badly-written twitter role-play than an actual story.
Get a beta, or a family member to look over and fix this.
Reviewing your own story for the sake of having a review? Rather pathetic...
Please, if you are going to bother posting at all, for the love of Merlin PLEASE take the effort to make your fic readable and well-written. This resembles more of a badly-written twitter role-play than an actual story.
Get a beta, or a family member to look over and fix this.