for A Pokemon Future (Involves Pearl, Hoenn, Orange Shipping etc)12/2/2019 c16 Guest
Pathetic, confusing, way too cheesy, unrealistic story, and above all, learn how to write properly. You failed to deliver what first chapter promised
Pathetic, confusing, way too cheesy, unrealistic story, and above all, learn how to write properly. You failed to deliver what first chapter promised
2/15/2017 c27 
1Fat Taco
AHH! I HAVE been reading this story for months now and realized that I NEVER reviewed! I'm SOOO Sorry! I'm one of those people who read more than one story at once! This was such a lovely story and I see that you'll be working on another one!? OH! I can't wait! :D
1Fat TacoAHH! I HAVE been reading this story for months now and realized that I NEVER reviewed! I'm SOOO Sorry! I'm one of those people who read more than one story at once! This was such a lovely story and I see that you'll be working on another one!? OH! I can't wait! :D
1/3/2017 c3 Coke
I didn't know dey be sniffin' that coke do.(jk I know you mean coca-cola...at least I think.)
I didn't know dey be sniffin' that coke do.(jk I know you mean coca-cola...at least I think.)
1/3/2017 c2 Money
I didn't know if you knew this but the in-game currency for Pokémon is Pokédollars. But if you prefer your country's currency that's fine. I was just making sure.
I didn't know if you knew this but the in-game currency for Pokémon is Pokédollars. But if you prefer your country's currency that's fine. I was just making sure.
10/17/2016 c27 Ttj1000
I read many Pokemon fanfic like this, but this is definitely one of the best that I've red
I read many Pokemon fanfic like this, but this is definitely one of the best that I've red
9/8/2016 c1 PokeFan
your grammar kinda bothers me, but I like your story!
your grammar kinda bothers me, but I like your story!
11/17/2015 c4 Guest
Hey, don't worry I understand. Being females, we 'sorta' love lemon scenes but when it comes to writing one, we go into an awkward state... I really wanna start writing stuff and put a lemon in it, but I find it awkward
Hey, don't worry I understand. Being females, we 'sorta' love lemon scenes but when it comes to writing one, we go into an awkward state... I really wanna start writing stuff and put a lemon in it, but I find it awkward
7/31/2015 c17 6The Lost Brother Grimm
Hi I am Masquerade of th Dark and I am here to tell you I'm in the same boat as you with the reviews but this storys good
6The Lost Brother GrimmHi I am Masquerade of th Dark and I am here to tell you I'm in the same boat as you with the reviews but this storys good
7/20/2015 c6 DatPokeFan
MY GOD THE BEST even thought it is not in a video BUT STILL THE BEST
MY GOD THE BEST even thought it is not in a video BUT STILL THE BEST
7/20/2015 c3 DatPokeFan
XD It is funny how you gave max a little lemonade
XD It is funny how you gave max a little lemonade
9/15/2014 c27 2Ayeun
This... Was... AWESOME!
I will be looking into your other stuff soon, and the sequel you mentioned!
2AyeunThis... Was... AWESOME!
I will be looking into your other stuff soon, and the sequel you mentioned!
8/21/2014 c27 pokefan eren
Dude, I'm tearing up. This was an amazing a beautiful story that had me wanting more from beginning to end. Can't wait to get started on the sequel.
Dude, I'm tearing up. This was an amazing a beautiful story that had me wanting more from beginning to end. Can't wait to get started on the sequel.