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12/14/2019 c2 Blackmagicbird
It is good fanfiction that type I been look for! Please to update when you can! I will be disappointed about this story will not to continue!
8/8/2018 c2 Addictedforevermore
I really liked it so far. Please consider updating.
12/28/2017 c1 6Titanium Flower
While the Dursleys were abusive, they weren't complete monsters. It's never been explicitly stated that anyone other than Dudley has ever hit Harry before. Going this far with their abuse is quite an exaggeration of their character.

No offence, but hospital staff aren't stupid. If a child came to them with an injury like that, they would definitely ask questions, since to someone in the medical profession, knife lacerations would be easy to spot. It's amazing that child protection services weren't involved.

With how young Harry is, it's strange how grown up he is? Reading a book on Psychology, at his age? Actually understanding it and putting it into practise? It seems a little unrealistic.

I think this story would be really good, if it weren't for these little factors. If it weren't for that, I think I'd enjoy it, but it's a little too unrealistic for my tastes.
1/4/2016 c2 CheekyChamp2015
Can you update please...
And I hope it's gonna be Harry/Neville
4/21/2014 c2 Guest
Please update! I'd love to know more about this great plot idea!
4/10/2014 c2 59BertaS
Since you commented on several of my stories I, I thought I would check you out. I like the start of this but see you haven't updated in a long while. I hope you are eventually inspired to finish as this is an original start.
BertaS
10/30/2013 c1 59wtchcool
1. "the freaks second hand" should be "the freak's second..." 2. "the fishing knifei" should be "fishing knife"; 3. "Vernon had to good a grip" should be "Vernon had too good..."; 4. "trembling boys hair" should be "trembling boy's hair..."; 5. "when the stitches where put in" should be "when the stitches were..."; 6. "the original scarii" should be "the original scar"; 7. "the boys fresh blood" should be "the boy's fresh blood"

There may be more, but I think I'm going to stop here. I don't really read horror or whatever genre you want to call this. I know the Dursleys sucked, but I don't see them going quite this far. If nothing else, having to take "the freak" to the hospital for stitches like that would draw more attention to him and them and their incredible lack of ability to take care of him.
7/16/2013 c2 Pheonixs1518
Hope you start updating again! _
6/27/2013 c2 2An Udar
I really like this story, especially how Harry takes care of Neville, and I really hope that you update soon! Maybe have Harry be in a 'protector' sort of position like he was for Neville but also for other students? even those you wouldn't expect! Eagerly awaiting the next chapter!
6/12/2013 c2 Mari Wollsch
when will you continua? xxxxxx
4/4/2013 c2 9leylinjan
wow, this is probably the most original beginning that still starts with the Dursleys and Hagrid taking Harry to Diagon Ally - I like it very very much, it's really good :)
2/12/2013 c2 JasminLillian
Update soon this story in really good so far!
2/8/2013 c2 Silvermane1
Can Hary be paired with neville
2/8/2013 c1 9Karlla Darcy Culen
I can not tell you how much and how I was happy to know that I found a story where Harry was DOM .. I think so few to read ..
2/8/2013 c2 Karlla Darcy Culen
I think that the combination of Neville , Theo and Blaise
A Lion , an Eagle and a snake ...
Of course and would welcome future an hufflepuff...
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