for Second Chance7/9/2016 c26 kitty
This was ending made me cry :,).I literally spent 6 hours straught reading you for writing this fanfic!
#dramione4ever
This was ending made me cry :,).I literally spent 6 hours straught reading you for writing this fanfic!
#dramione4ever
6/23/2016 c2 
3DancerCarrie
I know you wrote this a while ago, just check your usage of than instead of then.
3DancerCarrieI know you wrote this a while ago, just check your usage of than instead of then.
11/8/2015 c4 Guest
The continuous A/N's throughout each are really distracting and take away from the story. It can be hard to read at times. Maybe stick to putting an A/N at the top or bottom of each chatpers so the story flows better.
The continuous A/N's throughout each are really distracting and take away from the story. It can be hard to read at times. Maybe stick to putting an A/N at the top or bottom of each chatpers so the story flows better.
11/7/2015 c8 Guest
Really pansy.
Really pansy.
11/7/2015 c2 Soz
No one says for bloody sake
No one says for bloody sake
10/23/2015 c12 Luna The Nargle
This is a great story... Just a little bit unbelievable about that part with Luna with the fake accent, and some spelling mistakes here and there (spelled Gryffindor with an i replacing the y, Astronomy Tower is two words,and not one, Room of Requirement and not Room of Requirements)... Overall, it is an amazing story I am a HUGE Dramione shipper! :) (also, Hogwarts goes up to 7 years, not 8.)
This is a great story... Just a little bit unbelievable about that part with Luna with the fake accent, and some spelling mistakes here and there (spelled Gryffindor with an i replacing the y, Astronomy Tower is two words,and not one, Room of Requirement and not Room of Requirements)... Overall, it is an amazing story I am a HUGE Dramione shipper! :) (also, Hogwarts goes up to 7 years, not 8.)
10/25/2015 c25 2kickinfan321
this was an amazing story which was like a rollercoaster ride with so many twists and turns, but I still enjoyed every single bit of it. I couldn't stop reading all 25 chapters. This was a mind blowing story that has currently left me speechless so I honestly just don't know what to say. I am glad I read this story, it made my day!
2kickinfan321this was an amazing story which was like a rollercoaster ride with so many twists and turns, but I still enjoyed every single bit of it. I couldn't stop reading all 25 chapters. This was a mind blowing story that has currently left me speechless so I honestly just don't know what to say. I am glad I read this story, it made my day!
2/12/2015 c24 Guest
noooooooooooooo :( it was so good but so sad
noooooooooooooo :( it was so good but so sad
1/21/2015 c24 Luna
What just happened...
What just happened...
12/27/2013 c24 1ChocolateFriday
OMFG YOU SAID HERMIONE WOULD'NT DIE WHAT LIES DID YOU FEED ME SKDICMAODJCALRIWLAKSDIWLQ
1ChocolateFridayOMFG YOU SAID HERMIONE WOULD'NT DIE WHAT LIES DID YOU FEED ME SKDICMAODJCALRIWLAKSDIWLQ
11/24/2013 c24 thejha
wat the hell did u just do?
wat the hell did u just do?
11/11/2013 c24 Labiba Samara
WHAT THE FUCK?! I HATE YOU! WHAT WAS THE USE OF SUCH AN ENDING? YOU COULD HAVE JUST WRITTEN THAT THEY FOUND A CURE! BUT NO, YOU JUST WANT TO DRINK OUR TEARS! SERIOUSLY, I WAS LOOKING FORWARD TO THE ENDING! CAN'T BELIEVE YOU DID THAT! YOU SHOULD UNDERSTAND OUR FEELS, AT LEAST! NOW, LAST WARNING! CHANGE THE ENDING OR I'LL HAUNT YOU SO MUCH YOU'LL HAVE DEATHMARE! Ideas: Hermione woke up,panting from the horrible dream she looked to her right and saw Draco sleeping peacefully. Then it all came back to her. They had been able to cure Hermione's deathmare years ago, back in 8th year after all their friends had given her enough happiness for eternity. She smiled at those happy memories. 10 years had passed since they had left Hogwarts. Time has passed so swiftly, she thought. Everyone was married and had at least one child. She and Draco were married too, and had one baby boy, Scorpius Hyperion Malfoy, who looked exactly like a young Draco,with fair hair and grey eyes. But his features were soft at the edges like Hermione's ,not pointed like Draco's."What happened,darling? Why are you up so early?",a voice had asked looked and saw that Draco was awake and he had asked her the question. "It's nothing. I just had a bad dream, don't worry.",she said with a small smile."Okay, but sleep now. It's so early", said Draco with a loving smile. "Fine, I'm sleeping", said Hermione. I HOPE THIS HELPED, BUT PLEASE I BEG YOU, CHANGE THE ENDING! PRETTY PLEASE WITH A CHERRY ON TOP? YOU CAN FIND ME ON TWITTER BTW: LabibaSamara7 or on tumblr: .com or facebook: Labiba Samara
WHAT THE FUCK?! I HATE YOU! WHAT WAS THE USE OF SUCH AN ENDING? YOU COULD HAVE JUST WRITTEN THAT THEY FOUND A CURE! BUT NO, YOU JUST WANT TO DRINK OUR TEARS! SERIOUSLY, I WAS LOOKING FORWARD TO THE ENDING! CAN'T BELIEVE YOU DID THAT! YOU SHOULD UNDERSTAND OUR FEELS, AT LEAST! NOW, LAST WARNING! CHANGE THE ENDING OR I'LL HAUNT YOU SO MUCH YOU'LL HAVE DEATHMARE! Ideas: Hermione woke up,panting from the horrible dream she looked to her right and saw Draco sleeping peacefully. Then it all came back to her. They had been able to cure Hermione's deathmare years ago, back in 8th year after all their friends had given her enough happiness for eternity. She smiled at those happy memories. 10 years had passed since they had left Hogwarts. Time has passed so swiftly, she thought. Everyone was married and had at least one child. She and Draco were married too, and had one baby boy, Scorpius Hyperion Malfoy, who looked exactly like a young Draco,with fair hair and grey eyes. But his features were soft at the edges like Hermione's ,not pointed like Draco's."What happened,darling? Why are you up so early?",a voice had asked looked and saw that Draco was awake and he had asked her the question. "It's nothing. I just had a bad dream, don't worry.",she said with a small smile."Okay, but sleep now. It's so early", said Draco with a loving smile. "Fine, I'm sleeping", said Hermione. I HOPE THIS HELPED, BUT PLEASE I BEG YOU, CHANGE THE ENDING! PRETTY PLEASE WITH A CHERRY ON TOP? YOU CAN FIND ME ON TWITTER BTW: LabibaSamara7 or on tumblr: .com or facebook: Labiba Samara
11/11/2013 c23 Labiba
There's a slight mistake in this chapter. It says that Hermione is studying for her O. but they sit for their O. in 5th year. In 7th year(8th year in this case) they sit for their N.E. . So yeah,I hope this helped :)
There's a slight mistake in this chapter. It says that Hermione is studying for her O. but they sit for their O. in 5th year. In 7th year(8th year in this case) they sit for their N.E. . So yeah,I hope this helped :)
10/16/2013 c7 Guest
english do say chill by the way ;p
english do say chill by the way ;p