for Second Chance10/15/2013 c24 
1the-writer-who-cried
Sad ending, it was really good though. The infinites thing was copied from The Fault in Our Stars but it was a really good fanfic. Keep up the awesome writing:)
1the-writer-who-criedSad ending, it was really good though. The infinites thing was copied from The Fault in Our Stars but it was a really good fanfic. Keep up the awesome writing:)
10/15/2013 c24 Chasity Gommer
That is a very sad and tragic ending. you should of made it a happy one!
That is a very sad and tragic ending. you should of made it a happy one!
10/15/2013 c24 Mia
I'll so definetly kill you! What have you thought to write an end like this?! You made me cry :'(
I started this story 2 hours ago, and I loved it! And all the time I hoped that there would be a happy end. And then this :'(
But you are a good writer!
Mia
I'll so definetly kill you! What have you thought to write an end like this?! You made me cry :'(
I started this story 2 hours ago, and I loved it! And all the time I hoped that there would be a happy end. And then this :'(
But you are a good writer!
Mia
10/10/2013 c24 7MemoirsofaLostCause
DID YOU COPY THAT FROM "THE FAULT IN OUR STARS"?!
MERLIN'S BEARD THIS HAD BETTER BE ANOTHER DEATHMARE.
this is not a flame. their deaths were very eloquent and well-written. Hermione is so selfish. Draco just wrote off his heart to her, quite literally and metaphorically, and the wench won't even take it! she gets plastered and dies (more like a suicide to me but i'm sticking to facts). yeah i don't hate you, I just don't know how to feel.
7MemoirsofaLostCauseDID YOU COPY THAT FROM "THE FAULT IN OUR STARS"?!
MERLIN'S BEARD THIS HAD BETTER BE ANOTHER DEATHMARE.
this is not a flame. their deaths were very eloquent and well-written. Hermione is so selfish. Draco just wrote off his heart to her, quite literally and metaphorically, and the wench won't even take it! she gets plastered and dies (more like a suicide to me but i'm sticking to facts). yeah i don't hate you, I just don't know how to feel.
8/7/2013 c22 Guest
YOU HAS GOT TO POST MORE PLZ
YOU HAS GOT TO POST MORE PLZ
7/29/2013 c22 Guest
meh. retarded.
meh. retarded.
7/20/2013 c22 48bonniebonbon
LOL Ginny, "Amen" :P loved this chappie! By the way, how did you come up with the name Jay King? :P OMG just realized that FOUR more followers to go to ONE HUNDRED! WOOHOO! :P
I am so happy about the success of this story :P It's like Rainbow Breaker's stories. BETTER! :P
Whoa. and almost 40, 000 words. That's a whole lot of words :P
"I don't bloody want a future without you, Hermione!" was SOOO cute. But wouldn't it sound better if it was "I don't want a bloody future without you?" IDK...
POTTER ON,
Bonniebonbon
48bonniebonbonLOL Ginny, "Amen" :P loved this chappie! By the way, how did you come up with the name Jay King? :P OMG just realized that FOUR more followers to go to ONE HUNDRED! WOOHOO! :P
I am so happy about the success of this story :P It's like Rainbow Breaker's stories. BETTER! :P
Whoa. and almost 40, 000 words. That's a whole lot of words :P
"I don't bloody want a future without you, Hermione!" was SOOO cute. But wouldn't it sound better if it was "I don't want a bloody future without you?" IDK...
POTTER ON,
Bonniebonbon