9/15/2015 c1 Ellen
I'd like to know why she would just think nothing happened that night when she clearly felt pain and she saw others get hurt in front of her eyes. Sure she may have possibly been in a painful accident that took others away from her that led to a situation that made her act this way, like all OC's do for other Bleach stories. What I do like is that she takes everything in and releases it in a sort of reaction that is more comical than make us feel for her.
She doesn't even spare two cents for the suicidal pilot that could have been a catastrophic accident. Instead, she goes through this sort of break with some stranger that is a friend of her agent. She shows that she's not happy or pleased at his attempts to engage her in some songs. Then she's dropped off in the middle of nowhere where she is basically on her own and BAM she gets all up in meeting the Hollow that tried to kill Ichigo and his family.
I like how she feels pain that Hollows are around. Is it the same for ghosts? I caught that she remembered the pain in her head from some event in her past. This must mean that she was affiliated with a Hollow back in America or whatever country she was in when it happened-and that it didn't really end well for her.
I like this Mr. Browne character. We don't see him, but we hear about him through Sonya's opinions and mentions of who he possibly is, what he is to her, and what he does to and for her. She doesn't sound found of him at all, and it seems that because he is her agent, that he makes her do some sort of work dealing with music and arts. I hope you focus on her job than the story. Sure people will expect to see Ichigo 24/7 but we have to remember that we're seeing this through Sonya's eyes and that means we won't be aware of what may truly happen.
I do like this story. It has some flaws and grammar issues here and there but you really make it work. I'm surprised it doesn't have as much reviews as it deserves. I do like this Sonya character. She's charming and she does work well into the story. I think Bleach would have been funnier in the beginning if we got to see this girl. I guess that's why Fanfiction was born. I do hope people see what I see.
I'd like to know why she would just think nothing happened that night when she clearly felt pain and she saw others get hurt in front of her eyes. Sure she may have possibly been in a painful accident that took others away from her that led to a situation that made her act this way, like all OC's do for other Bleach stories. What I do like is that she takes everything in and releases it in a sort of reaction that is more comical than make us feel for her.
She doesn't even spare two cents for the suicidal pilot that could have been a catastrophic accident. Instead, she goes through this sort of break with some stranger that is a friend of her agent. She shows that she's not happy or pleased at his attempts to engage her in some songs. Then she's dropped off in the middle of nowhere where she is basically on her own and BAM she gets all up in meeting the Hollow that tried to kill Ichigo and his family.
I like how she feels pain that Hollows are around. Is it the same for ghosts? I caught that she remembered the pain in her head from some event in her past. This must mean that she was affiliated with a Hollow back in America or whatever country she was in when it happened-and that it didn't really end well for her.
I like this Mr. Browne character. We don't see him, but we hear about him through Sonya's opinions and mentions of who he possibly is, what he is to her, and what he does to and for her. She doesn't sound found of him at all, and it seems that because he is her agent, that he makes her do some sort of work dealing with music and arts. I hope you focus on her job than the story. Sure people will expect to see Ichigo 24/7 but we have to remember that we're seeing this through Sonya's eyes and that means we won't be aware of what may truly happen.
I do like this story. It has some flaws and grammar issues here and there but you really make it work. I'm surprised it doesn't have as much reviews as it deserves. I do like this Sonya character. She's charming and she does work well into the story. I think Bleach would have been funnier in the beginning if we got to see this girl. I guess that's why Fanfiction was born. I do hope people see what I see.
9/15/2015 c3 AngelSlayer12
When this story will continues...I love this story very much...So..can you quickly make next chapter...
When this story will continues...I love this story very much...So..can you quickly make next chapter...
9/12/2015 c2 8Forgetful Insanity
SO MUCH LAUGHTER WAS CAUSED OMAIGAWD it didn't help the migraine I have bUT I DONT CARE AHAHAHAAAAA
SO MUCH LAUGHTER WAS CAUSED OMAIGAWD it didn't help the migraine I have bUT I DONT CARE AHAHAHAAAAA
8/26/2015 c2 Stalker-chan
Wasn't Uryuu suppose to show Sonya around?
Wasn't Uryuu suppose to show Sonya around?
8/26/2015 c1 Stalker-chan
When are you going to update any of your stories? It's been a year since you did anything! I really like you stories so you better get your butt in gear now. It feels like you're probably losing interest in writing.
When are you going to update any of your stories? It's been a year since you did anything! I really like you stories so you better get your butt in gear now. It feels like you're probably losing interest in writing.
9/2/2013 c2 62Elise the Writing Desk
LOLZ Sonya XDD I'm crying...aha ha ha ha ha haaa! WTF. Her mind when she's taking photo w/ Ichi's body...cherry on da top XD
How long do u plan to bring this up? Hueco mundo arc? :3
For putting up this awesome chapter, apologu accepted! Crap, battery low...gotta go!
LOLZ Sonya XDD I'm crying...aha ha ha ha ha haaa! WTF. Her mind when she's taking photo w/ Ichi's body...cherry on da top XD
How long do u plan to bring this up? Hueco mundo arc? :3
For putting up this awesome chapter, apologu accepted! Crap, battery low...gotta go!