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6/2/2014 c2 typhoon-voidhog95
cant wait to see where this goes
12/30/2013 c2 theneutralite
very nice
12/30/2013 c1 theneutralite
not too bad
10/17/2013 c1 46Hikari Nova
you needs to work on your english and writing but a nice idea tho
5/28/2013 c2 SailorNova007
what type of pony is he
3/4/2013 c2 1That Guy You Always Forget
Aww sweet! A new chapter! I've been this for a while now and it's good to finally see an update! I do like how the stories progressive so far and I do like how it's going to be a Twilight and Naruto romance later on, so there's always that to look forward to. If I had to say anything though, it's that you spelled with wtih a couple of times and sometimes I see an upside down ? Here and there but nothing to bad. Maybe just think about getting a beta reader to do any last minute looks over. But that's all.
3/2/2013 c2 10avatoa
You misspelled the word "with" a lot. Plus you were using Spanish quotations with certain sentences with ? and ! symbols. Just so you know.
3/2/2013 c2 Cf96
Nice but a question what kind of pony is he
2/21/2013 c1 ordiclic
This story has a great start, and I want to know the following!
2/12/2013 c1 Erika
MORE!
2/11/2013 c1 1Ditsy Doo
Hey great start need a beta? I'd gladly proof read your chapters for you
2/9/2013 c1 1FillyDashie
kul i want more
1/28/2013 c1 Mioismoe
Please use quotation marks I really couldnt forve myself to read it in the current style.
1/27/2013 c1 shadowbroker13
Pretty good and I'm very interested in reading it. It's just kinda hard to read your style of writing but I'll try my best to read your story.
1/26/2013 c1 Cf96
Interesting so far

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