for Inseparable9/21/2013 c3 TheLastMarauder
Is the manger secretly The Doctor? Is he investigating too and used his physic paper to become a manager? Is that why he is wearing a bow-tie? I loved that, really enjoyed that bit, I agree with Larna, bow-ties are cool!
I was kinda hoping the Fred and Larna would go through the wardrobe off on some adventure with The Doctor there... maybe you could write a cross-over fic, where Fred and Larna do go off with The Doctor - I would definitely read that, it would be EPIC! :-)
Is the manger secretly The Doctor? Is he investigating too and used his physic paper to become a manager? Is that why he is wearing a bow-tie? I loved that, really enjoyed that bit, I agree with Larna, bow-ties are cool!
I was kinda hoping the Fred and Larna would go through the wardrobe off on some adventure with The Doctor there... maybe you could write a cross-over fic, where Fred and Larna do go off with The Doctor - I would definitely read that, it would be EPIC! :-)
9/21/2013 c2 TheLastMarauder
I love Narnia! I am so intrigued now, are Fred and Larna going to end up in a Narnia-like place after they investigate the wardrobe? Will they be trapped there? AHH! I need to know! I also didn't like the hint at foreboding there, the sense that something bad is going to happen - I don't want anything bad to happen to Fred and Larna! Must read on! :)
I love Narnia! I am so intrigued now, are Fred and Larna going to end up in a Narnia-like place after they investigate the wardrobe? Will they be trapped there? AHH! I need to know! I also didn't like the hint at foreboding there, the sense that something bad is going to happen - I don't want anything bad to happen to Fred and Larna! Must read on! :)
9/2/2013 c1 TheLastMarauder
I really liked this, mostly because we got to see Fred and Larna in Larna's Muggle home, you know? It was nice seeing them in a different setting. Again it was brilliantly written, really excellent. However, I would have thought that Fred would have been in awe of some of the Muggle things, like the DVD and television, because odds are he has never seen one before (and he might secretly have some of Mr Weasley's passion for Muggle things, seeing as he works in the Misuse of Muggle Artefacts Office).
I'm really glad you revealed Larna's results, I had been wondering for ages. She did herself justice anyhow! I also really liked how you didn't give her all perfect grades, just because she is a Ravenclaw. Giving her that one Merit was great in terms of character - she's not perfect, and that's great :)
I loved the ending - how Larna is in the compartment with her friends and just feels at home, that was brilliant - it sums it all up, home is where the heart is, as me mam says and Larna's heart is with Fred, but also with her friends too!
I really liked this, mostly because we got to see Fred and Larna in Larna's Muggle home, you know? It was nice seeing them in a different setting. Again it was brilliantly written, really excellent. However, I would have thought that Fred would have been in awe of some of the Muggle things, like the DVD and television, because odds are he has never seen one before (and he might secretly have some of Mr Weasley's passion for Muggle things, seeing as he works in the Misuse of Muggle Artefacts Office).
I'm really glad you revealed Larna's results, I had been wondering for ages. She did herself justice anyhow! I also really liked how you didn't give her all perfect grades, just because she is a Ravenclaw. Giving her that one Merit was great in terms of character - she's not perfect, and that's great :)
I loved the ending - how Larna is in the compartment with her friends and just feels at home, that was brilliant - it sums it all up, home is where the heart is, as me mam says and Larna's heart is with Fred, but also with her friends too!
6/14/2013 c14 madeline
that was the best story EVER! i loved it! i was heartbroken when larna walked in on 'fred' but then got soooooooooooooooooooooo happy when i found out it wasn't actually him and then they made up!
that was the best story EVER! i loved it! i was heartbroken when larna walked in on 'fred' but then got soooooooooooooooooooooo happy when i found out it wasn't actually him and then they made up!
94/4/2013 c5 Love.Fiction.2023
How could Fred do that to her?! No something has to be up, Fred would NOT do that.
How could Fred do that to her?! No something has to be up, Fred would NOT do that.