for Guilt12/14/2013 c3 
22dinosoprano
Two things...well three. First, good job. This is looking promising. Second, Silents is not a word and that isn't what the aliens are. Just say two members of the Silence, people will know exactly what you mean. Third, "He was sat" is terrible English. It's "he was sitting" or "he sat". Oh and one more thing, how can she get to Arcadia when it's a city on Gallifrey?
22dinosopranoTwo things...well three. First, good job. This is looking promising. Second, Silents is not a word and that isn't what the aliens are. Just say two members of the Silence, people will know exactly what you mean. Third, "He was sat" is terrible English. It's "he was sitting" or "he sat". Oh and one more thing, how can she get to Arcadia when it's a city on Gallifrey?
6/15/2013 c8 Guest
Aww cute and sad :3 keep writing!
Aww cute and sad :3 keep writing!
2/28/2013 c8 14FullWolfMoonGirl
Loving this. Appeals to my hurt/comfort cravings, and is also very sad and sweet. Please keep writing. :)
14FullWolfMoonGirlLoving this. Appeals to my hurt/comfort cravings, and is also very sad and sweet. Please keep writing. :)
1/30/2013 c1 1Hello-Sweetie19
THAT...was your first DW fanfic? That was amazing! Keep up ther great work!
1Hello-Sweetie19THAT...was your first DW fanfic? That was amazing! Keep up ther great work!