for Runaway Princess1/10/2018 c4 JimmyHall24
Come on Azula! The fact that you consistently generate those DEVASTATING blue flames tells me you are better. Now waste that motherfucker!
Come on Azula! The fact that you consistently generate those DEVASTATING blue flames tells me you are better. Now waste that motherfucker!
9/7/2016 c15 Guest
I get what you're trying to do with the whole justified negativity towards Azula by Katara and Zuko, but this Katara is just an outright bitch. She doesn't seem to be any better that Azula.
I get what you're trying to do with the whole justified negativity towards Azula by Katara and Zuko, but this Katara is just an outright bitch. She doesn't seem to be any better that Azula.
2/20/2016 c18 
4grither55
I really love this story and hope you continue it. It is so good! I do love Azula and how you portray her. I hope you update in time. I enjoyed all 18 chapters, and want to say good job! I do think Katara and Sokka could back off a bit despite Azula's history with them.
Well, hope you continue!
4grither55I really love this story and hope you continue it. It is so good! I do love Azula and how you portray her. I hope you update in time. I enjoyed all 18 chapters, and want to say good job! I do think Katara and Sokka could back off a bit despite Azula's history with them.
Well, hope you continue!
12/9/2015 c12 tacaloking
so far there are only a few thing that i find out of character the first thing i think is out of character is how azula admitted to ozai why she would not kill zuko i think it is more likely she would attempt to lie but i think in the state she was in at the time she would be unable to lie as good as she usually does and fail horrible and i dont see ozai letting azula getting away with lieing to his face the other problem is with katara i can see her being indifferent to azula but i cant see her unwilling to give clothes to azula or heal her i can see katara feeling that azula deserve what happen to her so for the most part i agree with how you wrote her and i think while there was a few out of character moments you manage to mostly keep them in character and find myself enjoying this story
so far there are only a few thing that i find out of character the first thing i think is out of character is how azula admitted to ozai why she would not kill zuko i think it is more likely she would attempt to lie but i think in the state she was in at the time she would be unable to lie as good as she usually does and fail horrible and i dont see ozai letting azula getting away with lieing to his face the other problem is with katara i can see her being indifferent to azula but i cant see her unwilling to give clothes to azula or heal her i can see katara feeling that azula deserve what happen to her so for the most part i agree with how you wrote her and i think while there was a few out of character moments you manage to mostly keep them in character and find myself enjoying this story
3/29/2015 c18 BSM99
... *puppy dog eyes* Please update? Pretty please? With a delicious cherry on top? I need to see what happened to Azula. Please?
... *puppy dog eyes* Please update? Pretty please? With a delicious cherry on top? I need to see what happened to Azula. Please?
1/29/2015 c16 1axel100
I'm not sure that Ozai would be so tolerable of Mai and Ty Lee here. I'm surprised they are not lockedu up or worse.
1axel100I'm not sure that Ozai would be so tolerable of Mai and Ty Lee here. I'm surprised they are not lockedu up or worse.
1/29/2015 c15 axel100
The dialogue was terrific. Azula is definitely in character. She doesn't just volunteer her story to them in a bid for sympathy. That would be demeaning in her mind. An expression of weakness. This way she keeps her enemies in the dark.
The dialogue was terrific. Azula is definitely in character. She doesn't just volunteer her story to them in a bid for sympathy. That would be demeaning in her mind. An expression of weakness. This way she keeps her enemies in the dark.
1/29/2015 c14 axel100
"so she freed me in hopes that I would be merciful enough to rescue her." And Sokka and Katara say this soemhow proves Azula is still playing them. How about, she couldn't free herself from her chains but she was able to free Sokka. If she beneifts in the long run, thats not exactly a devious strategy at work but a practical matter of survival. Maybe she should have just left them all tied up then.
"so she freed me in hopes that I would be merciful enough to rescue her." And Sokka and Katara say this soemhow proves Azula is still playing them. How about, she couldn't free herself from her chains but she was able to free Sokka. If she beneifts in the long run, thats not exactly a devious strategy at work but a practical matter of survival. Maybe she should have just left them all tied up then.
1/29/2015 c12 axel100
Not a fan of this chapter. Between Toff, Aang, Kataa, and Zuko would simply overwhelm a band of third rate extras. Throw in Azula(even injured) and the fight is even more one sided. I applaud to goal off getting Azula stuck with her two most strident adversaries, but the execution leaves something to be desired.
Not a fan of this chapter. Between Toff, Aang, Kataa, and Zuko would simply overwhelm a band of third rate extras. Throw in Azula(even injured) and the fight is even more one sided. I applaud to goal off getting Azula stuck with her two most strident adversaries, but the execution leaves something to be desired.
1/29/2015 c11 axel100
Definitely a step up from your last chapter. More dialogue and actions. We don't need to be mind readers to appreciate the dynamic between Azula and Zuko.
Definitely a step up from your last chapter. More dialogue and actions. We don't need to be mind readers to appreciate the dynamic between Azula and Zuko.