for Anything but Ordinary2/9/2013 c1 
3she.dreams.in.colour
Hi dear, congratulations on your first story! :)
I get that this is just the first chapter and perhaps you didn't want to give out too many details yet, but leaving the beginning of the story vague is a double edged sword. On one hand, the lack of specific details can intrigue people; on the other hand, it can also make them confused and shy away from the story. For my part I don't really know what to think about it yet because I don't understand what's happening, but maybe when you give us a clearer picture in the next chapters I can give a more constructive review. :)
3she.dreams.in.colourHi dear, congratulations on your first story! :)
I get that this is just the first chapter and perhaps you didn't want to give out too many details yet, but leaving the beginning of the story vague is a double edged sword. On one hand, the lack of specific details can intrigue people; on the other hand, it can also make them confused and shy away from the story. For my part I don't really know what to think about it yet because I don't understand what's happening, but maybe when you give us a clearer picture in the next chapters I can give a more constructive review. :)
2/4/2013 c1 3romeparistokyo
I have absolutely no idea what's going on but I loved it! All this mystery and darkness... I always fall for them! (: I'd love to see what happens next so keep writing!
3romeparistokyoI have absolutely no idea what's going on but I loved it! All this mystery and darkness... I always fall for them! (: I'd love to see what happens next so keep writing!