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53/10/2013 c6 Guest
will keep waiting
will keep waiting
2/4/2013 c1 Help
You should delete this then get a beta to fix the grammar and then repost it .. I guarantee you will have much more reviews and many more fans ... Trust , I had read to many stories where the grammar fucked it up ... It a perfect concept and plot it's just the grammar
You should delete this then get a beta to fix the grammar and then repost it .. I guarantee you will have much more reviews and many more fans ... Trust , I had read to many stories where the grammar fucked it up ... It a perfect concept and plot it's just the grammar
2/2/2013 c3 in the atmospher
Didn't log in but... good story! But the grammer! :( other than the grammer it's a great story... just needs editing!
Didn't log in but... good story! But the grammer! :( other than the grammer it's a great story... just needs editing!
2/2/2013 c3 Guest
very bad grammar. and this story is nothing new
very bad grammar. and this story is nothing new
2/2/2013 c2 Just Someone
English is not your first language right? You should ask someone to help you with the grammar but continue writing! This is quite interesting!
English is not your first language right? You should ask someone to help you with the grammar but continue writing! This is quite interesting!
2/2/2013 c4 Jay aka Jordan
I loved Trina and Lila will fight I lik her for that and jade needs to wake the hell up
I loved Trina and Lila will fight I lik her for that and jade needs to wake the hell up