7/31/2013 c18 3nona-lovato
This chapter confused me , I read it over 4 times and yet I don't get it.
Did they both get back into their real lives? Last chapter you ended it with them kissing under another shooting star, so they're both back , right? BUT they both remember what had happened when they exchanged lives?
Even though it confused me , I think that I'm gonna like it once I actually get it , lol.
Anyways, I don't have suggestions for you because you're good but I have a request. My request is to make the chapters longer like instead of a couple hundred of words make it like 1K or whatever. That'd be my only request. Also I'm sorry this is kinda delayed but My mood hasn't been making me log in on here much.
Anyhow , I can't wait for the next story that you'll start. I know it'll be as good as this one.
Good luck :)
This chapter confused me , I read it over 4 times and yet I don't get it.
Did they both get back into their real lives? Last chapter you ended it with them kissing under another shooting star, so they're both back , right? BUT they both remember what had happened when they exchanged lives?
Even though it confused me , I think that I'm gonna like it once I actually get it , lol.
Anyways, I don't have suggestions for you because you're good but I have a request. My request is to make the chapters longer like instead of a couple hundred of words make it like 1K or whatever. That'd be my only request. Also I'm sorry this is kinda delayed but My mood hasn't been making me log in on here much.
Anyhow , I can't wait for the next story that you'll start. I know it'll be as good as this one.
Good luck :)
7/31/2013 c18 MissApple17
Hey! I liked your ending, with how the two appologized to each other, and the last line refering to the title ;)
I can't wait for your next story ! ;)
Hey! I liked your ending, with how the two appologized to each other, and the last line refering to the title ;)
I can't wait for your next story ! ;)
7/24/2013 c17 nona-lovato
OMJ I really loved this chapter! It was really good, probably my favorite chapter! idk though I love all your chapters ;)
Its sad to know that this story is coming to an end but I can't wait to see how its going t end and to read the new story you're talking about ;)
Anyways , update soon and keep up the amazing work :D
OMJ I really loved this chapter! It was really good, probably my favorite chapter! idk though I love all your chapters ;)
Its sad to know that this story is coming to an end but I can't wait to see how its going t end and to read the new story you're talking about ;)
Anyways , update soon and keep up the amazing work :D
7/24/2013 c17 MissApple17
I love long chapters ! :D This was great, very sweet the Smitchie moment :D
Argg the next chap will be the last... but I also can't wait to read the next story ! What's it gonna be about ? (yes, I'm a tad curious hehe :P)
Keep up the great work, and I can't wait to read that final chap !
I love long chapters ! :D This was great, very sweet the Smitchie moment :D
Argg the next chap will be the last... but I also can't wait to read the next story ! What's it gonna be about ? (yes, I'm a tad curious hehe :P)
Keep up the great work, and I can't wait to read that final chap !
7/24/2013 c17 pesca13891
Yeah, you are kind of evil, but I can't be mad at you because this story is amazing!
Yeah, you are kind of evil, but I can't be mad at you because this story is amazing!
7/23/2013 c16 pesca13891
I can't wait to see what's up next! I can't wait for you to upload a new episode! I JUST CAN'T WAIT!
I can't wait to see what's up next! I can't wait for you to upload a new episode! I JUST CAN'T WAIT!
7/22/2013 c16 3nona-lovato
OMJ I feel like such a bitch for not reviewing for who knows how many chapters. I'm So sorry , please forgive me?
I really liked this chapter. I wonder when they're going to switch bodies again...
Anyways, I hope you forgive me for not reviewing and for chapter 7 of time to make you mine...
Please update soon, I can't wait to know what'll happen next.
Sorry again :)
OMJ I feel like such a bitch for not reviewing for who knows how many chapters. I'm So sorry , please forgive me?
I really liked this chapter. I wonder when they're going to switch bodies again...
Anyways, I hope you forgive me for not reviewing and for chapter 7 of time to make you mine...
Please update soon, I can't wait to know what'll happen next.
Sorry again :)
7/15/2013 c16 83LoveShipper
Glad the guys have a plan to get Mitchie and Shane able to play Final Jam
Glad the guys have a plan to get Mitchie and Shane able to play Final Jam
7/12/2013 c16 MissApple17
Nice how you turned the charm bracelet into sheet music ! Hope you update soon, I can't wait to see how Final Jam will turn out ! ;)
Keep up the good work ! Update soon !
Nice how you turned the charm bracelet into sheet music ! Hope you update soon, I can't wait to see how Final Jam will turn out ! ;)
Keep up the good work ! Update soon !