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10/3/2016 c2 madnessdownunder2
Good start.
2/16/2015 c2 1AthenaSophia85
Interesting premise! I'm interested in seeing where you go with this. :)

Also, as a full-time Master's student, I feel your pain as an undergrad senior. Hang in there!
1/24/2015 c2 Noxy the Proxy
Hmm, I wonder if there'll be more?
2/21/2014 c2 aussie girl
plese please add some more. I really really like this story and hope to see where you will take it.
1/17/2014 c2 Guest
This is a wonderful idea. Please update
1/14/2014 c2 7TraptWolf94
I like this take on Kili's love for the bow and arrow, and his 'tall for a dwarf' appearance. Well done!
12/18/2013 c2 5Padfootkicksbutt
this story is EXACTLY what I have been looking for :) the premise is awesome, i especially like how Kili is heir to both Mirkwood and the Lonely Mountain. The description of Kili's bow in particular was well done. I would love to read more of this, especially the inevitable encounter with Thranduil (and Legolas?) in Mirkwood :D
8/12/2013 c1 Re I Hate You
You sir are an immature child. Did you even ready this fanfiction? Are you aware that just because there is an OC and she is female doesn't make her a Mary Sue. If you don't like OC fanfictions then simple don't read them. You don't have to be a troll.
4/1/2013 c1 I Hate You
Yea, so this WAS good until you said OC. I hate to break it to you but nobody except hormonal idiotic fangirls who are about 12 or are of older age who are idiots will like this. You ruined this for me. Besides I typed in specifically Kili and Thorin not Kili and some lame ass Mary-Sue bitch I want to slit the throat of.
2/17/2013 c2 BigScary94
2/7/2013 c2 32ScribeOfRhapsody
My writing mentor is actually a published author, so I'll be happy to keep a lookout for things that might need improving.

First thing, though. If you're writing an OC/Kili story there is a VERY high chance the OC will be a Sue. Please google 'mary sue litmus test' and take it ASAP. If you can't write one character without her being Sue, how are you ever going to manage writing a believable full cast?

2/7/2013 c2 20harrylee94
... That's going to cause a few problems with dwarven society...
I like where this story's going. A very interesting idea. The fact that Thorin 'Elf-hater' is having to pretend to hate the one thing he loved must be so hard on him.
Kíli's character is very interesting too. The fact that he's attuned with nature and has the ability to see both sides of arguments when it comes to politics... He's very much his father's son. And I think the thing with the bow, how it made him feel complete, was very moving.
Well, you said you were open to suggestions so...
When you get to Mirkwood, which I hope you will, if he hasn't been told already about his herritage, then maybe Thranduil or Legolas should notice something... familiar about Kíli. Or even sooner than that maybe! Perhaps Galadriel talks to him about having a special destiny or something.
Just a few suggestions. :P
I hope you continue! And good luck with your War and Peace!
2/7/2013 c2 4Alpha Centarus
i love this! please continue to update
2/3/2013 c1 18Arkenshield
Hmmm... I am intrigued, normally I don't do OC or elf/dwarf, but this looks really promising.
2/3/2013 c1 2Singer Salvage
Oh hell, this should be good :D
Can't wait for the update.
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