for Lord of the One Piece9/21/2013 c2 
2Embrasia
Will there be any hobbits in this story? If so, which ones? When will they meet the 'One Piece' characters? :)
2EmbrasiaWill there be any hobbits in this story? If so, which ones? When will they meet the 'One Piece' characters? :)
2/10/2013 c1 Embrasia
Actually that was a terrific place to end a chapter. Make people wait for the battle scene, or else what incentive do we have to read the next chapter. Since I'm the first to review I have requests:
1. I want a paring for Legolas, and a well written smutty scene for him. I don't care if I have to wait untill the very end to read it :)
2. Shorten your chapters so I can read them on my breaks :)
Well done! Lots of description! You did a wonderful job at building suspense!
-Embrasia-
Actually that was a terrific place to end a chapter. Make people wait for the battle scene, or else what incentive do we have to read the next chapter. Since I'm the first to review I have requests:
1. I want a paring for Legolas, and a well written smutty scene for him. I don't care if I have to wait untill the very end to read it :)
2. Shorten your chapters so I can read them on my breaks :)
Well done! Lots of description! You did a wonderful job at building suspense!
-Embrasia-