for alternate dragon fight scean12/26/2013 c17 Guest
Great story please update PLEASE! :)
Great story please update PLEASE! :)
11/9/2013 c9 
41sierra.steinbrecher
I actually had something like this planned myself. I have a lot of trouble figuring out who said what.
41sierra.steinbrecherI actually had something like this planned myself. I have a lot of trouble figuring out who said what.
2/21/2013 c7 5johnnylee619
Oh snap! That should teach Snoutlout a lesson. Can't wait for the next chapter (wonder how everyone will react after that). Your story is great though there are some words that are suppose to be together, such as "child hood" instead of "childhood", but I don't think it's your fault, sometimes the spelling checker gave the wrong words or weird words. For example, when I type the word "fire" the spelling checker gave me "Ffghteo". Weird right? So try to prof-read it.
5johnnylee619Oh snap! That should teach Snoutlout a lesson. Can't wait for the next chapter (wonder how everyone will react after that). Your story is great though there are some words that are suppose to be together, such as "child hood" instead of "childhood", but I don't think it's your fault, sometimes the spelling checker gave the wrong words or weird words. For example, when I type the word "fire" the spelling checker gave me "Ffghteo". Weird right? So try to prof-read it.
2/18/2013 c5 Guest
You should make these a bit longer but other than that your it's good
You should make these a bit longer but other than that your it's good
2/17/2013 c3 lovelyloupus
:D OOOOOH ITS SO GOOD! i love it! he's a bamf! bamf bamf bamf! its so good! i love it so much, this story is gonna be so great i can tell!
:D OOOOOH ITS SO GOOD! i love it! he's a bamf! bamf bamf bamf! its so good! i love it so much, this story is gonna be so great i can tell!
2/16/2013 c2 lovelyloupus
:D AAAAAAH! its so good! I'm so happy! thank you thank you! and i love the snot lout being a jerk thing! very true to his character, its so good! thank you!
:D AAAAAAH! its so good! I'm so happy! thank you thank you! and i love the snot lout being a jerk thing! very true to his character, its so good! thank you!
2/16/2013 c2 johnnylee619
The story is great, though, you need to let the reader know what time line is it because by the way chapter 2 goes, it looks like it took place after a month or two. All in all, the story is great and I hope chapter 2 is about Astrid since I didn't notice Hiccup saying goodbye to her.
P.S. Add a breaking line to let the reader know that it's off to another character POV like Stoick.
The story is great, though, you need to let the reader know what time line is it because by the way chapter 2 goes, it looks like it took place after a month or two. All in all, the story is great and I hope chapter 2 is about Astrid since I didn't notice Hiccup saying goodbye to her.
P.S. Add a breaking line to let the reader know that it's off to another character POV like Stoick.
2/7/2013 c1 Peace101
I love it but Astros should go with hiccup that would be so sweat
I love it but Astros should go with hiccup that would be so sweat