for Naruto Redone2/6/2013 c3 
1NATSUxERZA 123456
Well I understand about the whole being new and I am kinka interested in this new story line. Who will he be paired with please not hinata or Sakura , I have no personal probs with them it is they are used a lot , maby yugito or samui. Update soon
1NATSUxERZA 123456Well I understand about the whole being new and I am kinka interested in this new story line. Who will he be paired with please not hinata or Sakura , I have no personal probs with them it is they are used a lot , maby yugito or samui. Update soon
2/6/2013 c3 vincentiusnatalus
well, i think your story move too fast. but your plot is unusual(and unusual is good _). it's good that few author don't use canon storyline. it's give us(reader) more aspect and pov of naruto universe
well, i think your story move too fast. but your plot is unusual(and unusual is good _). it's good that few author don't use canon storyline. it's give us(reader) more aspect and pov of naruto universe