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6/30/2015 c14 Mickennxtre68
This story is 2 years old. And it ends on a cliff hanger...
if this means anything,

PLEASE CONTINUE

I actually really Enjoyed it.
8/6/2014 c1 16Gaige's Peppy Sweetheart
How can a bee fart?
11/27/2013 c1 Puffy Pup girl
Cool,I LOVED it. you know I'm glad Silver's in it.
Keep up the GREAT work.
3/21/2013 c8 17aliciathewolf45
i giggled at parts. what took ya? glad your back!
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2/22/2013 c7 aliciathewolf45
this was pretty interesting. yet funny!
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2/20/2013 c6 aliciathewolf45
BOOM! complete impact! that was funny at the end!
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2/18/2013 c5 aliciathewolf45
OMG i was laughing so hard! tooty the gassy bear! XD
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2/14/2013 c4 aliciathewolf45
Hahahaha Vector you are an idiot.
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2/11/2013 c3 aliciathewolf45
i just want to jump im there and give that freaking cutie a big bee hug!
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2/11/2013 c3 4SakuraDreamerz
*giggles*
2/7/2013 c2 17aliciathewolf45
Poor little Charmy. He's such an annoying little cutie!
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2/5/2013 c1 19Lord Kelvin
Vector-Charmy-Vector-Vector-Charmy.

The story looks weird when every line begins with a name or a quotation. Develop the narrative, so it's not just a script altered to keep peace with FFN's rules.

Your summary does not stand out. The premise seems to go the following way: character X is bored, so character X takes a hike. I applaud the simplicity and har-har of it all, but you really want to highlight how the story is special, different from a bunch of other fics posted today.

A long title that screams "random humour" in a story about friendship and adventure is bound to attract an unintended audience. I'm also wondering whether this should be a crossover. Isn't the clock locale from a different universe? There are so many underused locations in the Sonic realm. Paying tribute to them is bound to get you more fans.

Have a nice, abuse-free day.
2/5/2013 c1 17aliciathewolf45
This looks like a really cool story! Just hope there isn't any romance between the two...
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