for The Broken12/29/2013 c1 Guest
Well that had great potential. It was very interesting but more details would have been nice, like: who was she to Darry? Who was she to Tim? The same with her dad. How was it rims fault? Ect. Maybe u could make it longer and more detailed. I would read it.
Well that had great potential. It was very interesting but more details would have been nice, like: who was she to Darry? Who was she to Tim? The same with her dad. How was it rims fault? Ect. Maybe u could make it longer and more detailed. I would read it.