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4/1/2013 c4 breecutie
This is really good when are you going to continue?
3/3/2013 c4 aa
holy... this is soooo good I love it sooooo much vair fabby and all. you must do more and more is is soooooo griping.
2/17/2013 c4 34LauranTheBiscotti
Well. The story and the conversations are very good, just maybe clean up the paragraphs and spellling a little?
Otherwise, very good job !
xoxo
2/11/2013 c4 Courtz
I NEED MORE :) xx
2/11/2013 c1 3lhwx
Hey :) As for the first chapter, I think the story telling is good. It sounds like Georgia but you really need to work on basic english like spelling, punctuation and paragraphing. If you got that up to scratch I think it would be really good. Sorry if I offend you, I'm just trying to help x
2/10/2013 c3 Anon
This is really good x

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