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4/27/2019 c1 10AlchemyWriter
Maybe Harry gets a power from the Ourobotos tattoo sometime while he’s at the Dursley’s, and it makes him not rely on magic as much.
2/12/2014 c1 Guest
You have a good story...
You have a few mistakes.
Also, you should separate out your paragraphs and dialogue because the story would be better read that way.
It doesn't read well because it's bunched together.
Also, you have misspelled words. Vary does sound like very but it is not the same word. You should get a beta. Otherwise...good story.
2/7/2013 c1 1geetac
I liked the chapter very much

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