for Lowell7/4/2021 c41 anatolealice
I love this story. Such a fascinating idea and works so well. I’m sorry you didn’t finish it.
I love this story. Such a fascinating idea and works so well. I’m sorry you didn’t finish it.
10/24/2017 c41 
37Michelle Bones
Me encanta esta historia! Esta bien escrita y los personajes etan bien estructurados. Me encanta que David sea tan comprensivo con Emily y que este dispuesto a aceptar la responsabilidad de jenny.
Continua la historia. En realidad es una muy buena trama y me gustaria verla completa.
Va a favoritos.
37Michelle BonesMe encanta esta historia! Esta bien escrita y los personajes etan bien estructurados. Me encanta que David sea tan comprensivo con Emily y que este dispuesto a aceptar la responsabilidad de jenny.
Continua la historia. En realidad es una muy buena trama y me gustaria verla completa.
Va a favoritos.
11/20/2013 c41 Renee
will you finish this story, I really hope that you would , I would like to know if Emily and Jenny stay in this time or go back to theirs.
will you finish this story, I really hope that you would , I would like to know if Emily and Jenny stay in this time or go back to theirs.
8/5/2013 c41 leshagen
What a difference a week makes. Emily has now assumed the role of teacher alongside David. It's amazing how far she has come so quickly. I really enjoyed this chapter, very well written, thanks :D
What a difference a week makes. Emily has now assumed the role of teacher alongside David. It's amazing how far she has come so quickly. I really enjoyed this chapter, very well written, thanks :D
7/27/2013 c41 Jenny1701
Emily is getting good at teasing David isn't she. i wonder does she have a new appreciation of how much David helped her to adjust as she is trying to do the same for Jenny? I think Jenny is going to be very shocked to see not only how children now-a-days are dressed but how they behave. That together with the actual shopping, the meeting with Angela and Jack and David's talk with Emily about their accepting responsibility for Jenny will make for a very interesting next few chapters which I am very eager to read.
Jenny
Emily is getting good at teasing David isn't she. i wonder does she have a new appreciation of how much David helped her to adjust as she is trying to do the same for Jenny? I think Jenny is going to be very shocked to see not only how children now-a-days are dressed but how they behave. That together with the actual shopping, the meeting with Angela and Jack and David's talk with Emily about their accepting responsibility for Jenny will make for a very interesting next few chapters which I am very eager to read.
Jenny
7/24/2013 c40 leshagen
Jenny's first trip in a car or any where for that reason ought to be fun. Thanks for continuing the story :D
Jenny's first trip in a car or any where for that reason ought to be fun. Thanks for continuing the story :D
7/24/2013 c39 leshagen
Like Emily, Jenny is quickly realizing her good fortune. She has a lot of wonders to discover...I hope she gets to stay. :D
Like Emily, Jenny is quickly realizing her good fortune. She has a lot of wonders to discover...I hope she gets to stay. :D
7/19/2013 c1 Guest
This story is brilliant, please keep it going.
Your story reminds me of a movie staring 'Peter Phelps' called 'Playing Beatie Bow' on dvd.
I think having David and Emily play characters where they are very different to their personalities and behaviours compared to the tv 'Bones', its been very humerous to read and a real change from alot of other 'bones' fanfictions...
Caroline, Melbourne, Australia
This story is brilliant, please keep it going.
Your story reminds me of a movie staring 'Peter Phelps' called 'Playing Beatie Bow' on dvd.
I think having David and Emily play characters where they are very different to their personalities and behaviours compared to the tv 'Bones', its been very humerous to read and a real change from alot of other 'bones' fanfictions...
Caroline, Melbourne, Australia
7/21/2013 c40 bblover228
I wasn't expecting Jenny to make the time travel also. It should present some new hurdles for Emily and David. I totally believe they will adopt Jenny.
I wasn't expecting Jenny to make the time travel also. It should present some new hurdles for Emily and David. I totally believe they will adopt Jenny.
7/18/2013 c39 tembo
Just came across this wonderful story. Am really enjoying it and can't wait to see what happens next. I hope that Emily and Jenny get to stay with David forever and not go back in time.
Just came across this wonderful story. Am really enjoying it and can't wait to see what happens next. I hope that Emily and Jenny get to stay with David forever and not go back in time.
7/15/2013 c39 Uticasue
I was looking at this fiction posting for quite some time before I took a chance on it. I don't choose AU stories normally, I stick to the more believable fiction. Once I started reading this, however, I was riveted and read through the first 39 chapters in one sitting. I am enjoying your story, and I am eager to read more! Thank you for giving us this intriguing version of "Bones".
I was looking at this fiction posting for quite some time before I took a chance on it. I don't choose AU stories normally, I stick to the more believable fiction. Once I started reading this, however, I was riveted and read through the first 39 chapters in one sitting. I am enjoying your story, and I am eager to read more! Thank you for giving us this intriguing version of "Bones".
7/13/2013 c39 Jenny1701
Hi - Jenny sounds sweet and quite intelligent. There is obviously something strange going on at Mrs Harris's house - or did Jenny take some of her "remedy" like Emily did. It's a worry as there could be more sudden visitors? although Mrs Harris house has been there a while and as far as anyone knows this is the first time (and 2nd) such an appearance has happened. It's also worrying that the process may be reversible - both Emily and Jenny will be much better off in our era and I'm sure Emily and David don't want to be parted. It would be interesting to see what David made of their Era but I would not want them to be "stuck" there. Was Emily missed? was her disappearance a mystery in there time? Looks like David is getting a ready made family. Loving the new twist and the fact that it is giving a child's perspective on our world. Great job.
Jenny
Hi - Jenny sounds sweet and quite intelligent. There is obviously something strange going on at Mrs Harris's house - or did Jenny take some of her "remedy" like Emily did. It's a worry as there could be more sudden visitors? although Mrs Harris house has been there a while and as far as anyone knows this is the first time (and 2nd) such an appearance has happened. It's also worrying that the process may be reversible - both Emily and Jenny will be much better off in our era and I'm sure Emily and David don't want to be parted. It would be interesting to see what David made of their Era but I would not want them to be "stuck" there. Was Emily missed? was her disappearance a mystery in there time? Looks like David is getting a ready made family. Loving the new twist and the fact that it is giving a child's perspective on our world. Great job.
Jenny
7/11/2013 c38 leshagen
Well I didn't see that coming, lol. David's house must be some sort of portal or doorway between the two time periods. Will they ever discover why that's happening? Great chapter, thanks :D
Well I didn't see that coming, lol. David's house must be some sort of portal or doorway between the two time periods. Will they ever discover why that's happening? Great chapter, thanks :D
7/6/2013 c38 ale2695
How many chapters will have your story?
How many chapters will have your story?
7/5/2013 c38 Guest
This was, is and will be fun to read my friend ,Wonderful job _
This was, is and will be fun to read my friend ,Wonderful job _