
2/13/2013 c1
15kaminoko-x
OOOOhh. Favourite lines:
"...as you try to forget all the horrors you saw (you were)."
"...burned in fire (oh, your greatest enemy) deep deep breaths, they're all dead and gone now"
Beautiful beautiful stuff. Those particular lines really struck me because they're so interesting- how she was the girl on fire and she was like a nightmare, but fire's everything she doesn't want now.
Amaaziiing.

OOOOhh. Favourite lines:
"...as you try to forget all the horrors you saw (you were)."
"...burned in fire (oh, your greatest enemy) deep deep breaths, they're all dead and gone now"
Beautiful beautiful stuff. Those particular lines really struck me because they're so interesting- how she was the girl on fire and she was like a nightmare, but fire's everything she doesn't want now.
Amaaziiing.
2/10/2013 c1 Guest
Fabbity fab fab
Fabbity fab fab
2/10/2013 c1
9katsparkle13
Lovely read. Some very intreuging choices of words. I couldn't help thinking, as I read it, that they would make awesome song lyrics! (Think, like Florence and the Machine) Brilliant and I'm glad I read it.

Lovely read. Some very intreuging choices of words. I couldn't help thinking, as I read it, that they would make awesome song lyrics! (Think, like Florence and the Machine) Brilliant and I'm glad I read it.