for Young & Explicit7/1/2013 c8 Smile-Chica
Nice chapter name's :D
I like Sydney. But then again Tala is cute and Kai... Well he's Kai xD
Good Luck xx
Nice chapter name's :D
I like Sydney. But then again Tala is cute and Kai... Well he's Kai xD
Good Luck xx
4/2/2013 c1 Z-Aquarius-Kai
Hi! I know very late response to your pm but due to my final exams which were veryyyy hard I didn't have a chance to read anything. So well here I am. I usually don't read M rated but that's ok. :) the storyline seems interesting. Sydney's cool ;)
much love,
zak
ps. How r u?
Hi! I know very late response to your pm but due to my final exams which were veryyyy hard I didn't have a chance to read anything. So well here I am. I usually don't read M rated but that's ok. :) the storyline seems interesting. Sydney's cool ;)
much love,
zak
ps. How r u?
3/12/2013 c8 xXFaith.22Xx
Good Chapter and idea's. I wonder what's going to happen to them? It sound mysterious or something bad is like... gonna happen :S
Update Soon x
Good Chapter and idea's. I wonder what's going to happen to them? It sound mysterious or something bad is like... gonna happen :S
Update Soon x
3/12/2013 c8 XxKhloexX
Great Chapter! And I like Sydney character... But I never thought of her smoking, thats a big shocker! :O
Good Luck with the Rest! x
Great Chapter! And I like Sydney character... But I never thought of her smoking, thats a big shocker! :O
Good Luck with the Rest! x
3/6/2013 c7 MahjabinMaliha.Milow
Late review,I knw! :/
but anyways,thanks for the cliff hanger! :P
in which point of view?! : It doesn't let us lose interest in a story and make me think of it everytime...
no I wasn't expecting Kai to come to Sydney's place like this ...
are they gonna kiss?! Fifty-fifty chance...
but as it's sydney & as she is in a hurry so i guess she won't...or will she?!
hahaha...we'll see !
I think I will be needing 2 chapters to read per week...
:)
Update!
xx
Maliha
Late review,I knw! :/
but anyways,thanks for the cliff hanger! :P
in which point of view?! : It doesn't let us lose interest in a story and make me think of it everytime...
no I wasn't expecting Kai to come to Sydney's place like this ...
are they gonna kiss?! Fifty-fifty chance...
but as it's sydney & as she is in a hurry so i guess she won't...or will she?!
hahaha...we'll see !
I think I will be needing 2 chapters to read per week...
:)
Update!
xx
Maliha
2/28/2013 c7 Truth
This Story is Good. A few mistakes here and there, but its still on my favourite list. And reading your saying before, the story started I hope you get, better and sooner or later or fever, will go down and leave you, alone. Good Luck on the, Story though!
This Story is Good. A few mistakes here and there, but its still on my favourite list. And reading your saying before, the story started I hope you get, better and sooner or later or fever, will go down and leave you, alone. Good Luck on the, Story though!
3/2/2013 c7 
2Blazedoll
interesting story! It had been building so smoothly with proper details, i find it entrancing and beautiful. Can't wait for another chapter, especially with a cliff hanger as such :D
2Blazedollinteresting story! It had been building so smoothly with proper details, i find it entrancing and beautiful. Can't wait for another chapter, especially with a cliff hanger as such :D
3/1/2013 c2 No Longer Active Here
There were a few grammatical errors here and there (missed commas and apostrophe's here and there) but it didn't ruin the flow of the reading experience anyway. Just thought I'd make that point.
I really like highschool/college stories, they're always so much fun to read. I've got one of my own and it's such a blast to write. Anyway, looking forward to seeing how the other Beyblade characters interact with your OC's in the coming chapters.
You'll be hearing more from me soon.
Aquila
There were a few grammatical errors here and there (missed commas and apostrophe's here and there) but it didn't ruin the flow of the reading experience anyway. Just thought I'd make that point.
I really like highschool/college stories, they're always so much fun to read. I've got one of my own and it's such a blast to write. Anyway, looking forward to seeing how the other Beyblade characters interact with your OC's in the coming chapters.
You'll be hearing more from me soon.
Aquila
2/28/2013 c7 xXFaith.22Xx
Again I hope you get better Hun!x And this Chapter was Long but really interesting! Wow that school is lucky, school cancelled cause that incident I would be over the moon! XD However Good Luck on the Story and getting better! Kisses and Hugs! :*
Again I hope you get better Hun!x And this Chapter was Long but really interesting! Wow that school is lucky, school cancelled cause that incident I would be over the moon! XD However Good Luck on the Story and getting better! Kisses and Hugs! :*
2/28/2013 c7 Mr.Drizzy
Nice 2 chapters in One. I dont know maybe Sydney was in the middle of kissing Kai then suddenly realising it she pushed him away, feeling maybe ashamed? Hmmm I dont know anything could happen y'know.
Yeah. I hope you get better with all the distractions occuring. Good Luck too! ;)
Nice 2 chapters in One. I dont know maybe Sydney was in the middle of kissing Kai then suddenly realising it she pushed him away, feeling maybe ashamed? Hmmm I dont know anything could happen y'know.
Yeah. I hope you get better with all the distractions occuring. Good Luck too! ;)