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7/1/2013 c8 Smile-Chica
Nice chapter name's :D
I like Sydney. But then again Tala is cute and Kai... Well he's Kai xD
Good Luck xx
4/22/2013 c2 14Z-Aquarius-Kai
I totally love it! :)
4/2/2013 c1 Z-Aquarius-Kai
Hi! I know very late response to your pm but due to my final exams which were veryyyy hard I didn't have a chance to read anything. So well here I am. I usually don't read M rated but that's ok. :) the storyline seems interesting. Sydney's cool ;)
much love,
ps. How r u?
3/13/2013 c8 beybladechick75
good chapter! your story is coming along really nicely.
3/12/2013 c8 Mr.Drizzy
Great :)
3/12/2013 c8 xXFaith.22Xx
Good Chapter and idea's. I wonder what's going to happen to them? It sound mysterious or something bad is like... gonna happen :S

Update Soon x
3/12/2013 c8 XxKhloexX
Great Chapter! And I like Sydney character... But I never thought of her smoking, thats a big shocker! :O
Good Luck with the Rest! x
3/11/2013 c8 26EmilyJade91
great update :) can't wait for more
3/6/2013 c7 MahjabinMaliha.Milow
Late review,I knw! :/
but anyways,thanks for the cliff hanger! :P
in which point of view?! : It doesn't let us lose interest in a story and make me think of it everytime...
no I wasn't expecting Kai to come to Sydney's place like this ...
are they gonna kiss?! Fifty-fifty chance...
but as it's sydney & as she is in a hurry so i guess she won't...or will she?!
hahaha...we'll see !
I think I will be needing 2 chapters to read per week...
2/28/2013 c7 Truth
This Story is Good. A few mistakes here and there, but its still on my favourite list. And reading your saying before, the story started I hope you get, better and sooner or later or fever, will go down and leave you, alone. Good Luck on the, Story though!
3/2/2013 c7 2Blazedoll
interesting story! It had been building so smoothly with proper details, i find it entrancing and beautiful. Can't wait for another chapter, especially with a cliff hanger as such :D
3/1/2013 c2 No Longer Active Here
There were a few grammatical errors here and there (missed commas and apostrophe's here and there) but it didn't ruin the flow of the reading experience anyway. Just thought I'd make that point.

I really like highschool/college stories, they're always so much fun to read. I've got one of my own and it's such a blast to write. Anyway, looking forward to seeing how the other Beyblade characters interact with your OC's in the coming chapters.

You'll be hearing more from me soon.

2/28/2013 c7 26EmilyJade91
Really good :) I hope you continue updating soon.
2/28/2013 c7 xXFaith.22Xx
Again I hope you get better Hun!x And this Chapter was Long but really interesting! Wow that school is lucky, school cancelled cause that incident I would be over the moon! XD However Good Luck on the Story and getting better! Kisses and Hugs! :*
2/28/2013 c7 Mr.Drizzy
Nice 2 chapters in One. I dont know maybe Sydney was in the middle of kissing Kai then suddenly realising it she pushed him away, feeling maybe ashamed? Hmmm I dont know anything could happen y'know.
Yeah. I hope you get better with all the distractions occuring. Good Luck too! ;)
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