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6/26/2013 c6 3SakuraKoi
O.O
6/26/2013 c5 SakuraKoi
8-)
6/26/2013 c4 SakuraKoi
Don't cry! *crying*
6/26/2013 c3 SakuraKoi
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6/26/2013 c2 SakuraKoi
0.0
6/26/2013 c1 SakuraKoi
wow so sad
6/23/2013 c1 Jazzy-Booey
The way you make the characters talk like they're web chatting is a bit different and wierd. But this is your story, so i understand. Try making it like this. Haruhi asked "Chairman, may I speak with you?". Yuzuru answered, "Of course Haruhi, how could I say no to one of my nieces." Something like that. Just a little advice. You don't have to take it though. Nice chapter and story! Can't wait for more!
4/28/2013 c13 Twin lover
OMG OMG OMG OMG! Please update on god please I love that u made haru-chan a twin sister ohhhh are they like the twins and have sisterly love kawaii! Soooo cute please update!
4/26/2013 c13 Luna-oneesan
Update please vicky-sama
4/25/2013 c13 Usa-chan
Wah please please please update I love theses pairing but coul u please write them a little longer
4/12/2013 c3 1sapphireanguill
Awe. Poor Haruhi. I like this story so far:)
3/4/2013 c3 10BlackAndWhiteRoseWolf
Cool! Please update!
2/28/2013 c3 41Hita-Chan
Hmm it's interesting. I recommend getting a beta reader and to get rid of the script chat because it is against the rules/guidelines. But it is a good story, I'd like to see where you go with it,
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