for Why Me? (Original)12/23/2016 c20 
1PrincessTianaCasanova
THIS STORY WAS SO GOOD! I just finished reading it and it helped sparked inspiration for my story! You're an awesome writer and I enjoyed the story and characters so much! I know this story was written such a long time ago, but it was still awesome!
1PrincessTianaCasanovaTHIS STORY WAS SO GOOD! I just finished reading it and it helped sparked inspiration for my story! You're an awesome writer and I enjoyed the story and characters so much! I know this story was written such a long time ago, but it was still awesome!
6/3/2016 c7 Teri
I noticed you left Haruhi out of a lot of this... Hikaru and Mel stayed behind, Karou and Tamaki were spying and Kyoya, Mori, and Hunny went to Venice... Where was Haruhi?
I noticed you left Haruhi out of a lot of this... Hikaru and Mel stayed behind, Karou and Tamaki were spying and Kyoya, Mori, and Hunny went to Venice... Where was Haruhi?
7/4/2015 c20 2NamesAreFutile
Tamaki and Haruhi is the best!
My sister thinks that she should be with Hikaru and says that a TamaHaru realtionship would be like Hermione and Harry. (needless to say, she is wrong. That's why she didn't read the manga)
2NamesAreFutileTamaki and Haruhi is the best!
My sister thinks that she should be with Hikaru and says that a TamaHaru realtionship would be like Hermione and Harry. (needless to say, she is wrong. That's why she didn't read the manga)
12/1/2013 c20 izcyloves souleater
good very good i mean the hikaru and kaoru relationship wasnt as strong as it really is and well thats about it i thought it was perfect,...oh and i think it would of been cool if she would of acctualley ended up pregnant,it would of added more flare to the story. But besides that you did a great job and i like that you did that thing where they had to tell there most embarissing things that happen to them wen they were little yeah so good job!:)
good very good i mean the hikaru and kaoru relationship wasnt as strong as it really is and well thats about it i thought it was perfect,...oh and i think it would of been cool if she would of acctualley ended up pregnant,it would of added more flare to the story. But besides that you did a great job and i like that you did that thing where they had to tell there most embarissing things that happen to them wen they were little yeah so good job!:)
8/5/2013 c13 Guest
Lol the pps was sooo funny!
Lol the pps was sooo funny!
8/3/2013 c20 1YouSaidOkay
Absolutely marvelous darling! Just fantastic! Do you see my tears yet!? ;-; ;-; ;-;
10 stars madam!
1YouSaidOkayAbsolutely marvelous darling! Just fantastic! Do you see my tears yet!? ;-; ;-; ;-;
10 stars madam!
7/28/2013 c20 2BrokenSubjectMatter
I sat here crying as I read this chapter D: This was so good and so sad and just UGGGGGGGGg you're killing me. (:
2BrokenSubjectMatterI sat here crying as I read this chapter D: This was so good and so sad and just UGGGGGGGGg you're killing me. (:
7/24/2013 c20 2MysticPerv
I need some time to cry now. This chapter made me feel like a mother. I just felt like I watched Melanie grow up to be a young beautiful woman. I just need to go to my emo corner and cry some more.
2MysticPervI need some time to cry now. This chapter made me feel like a mother. I just felt like I watched Melanie grow up to be a young beautiful woman. I just need to go to my emo corner and cry some more.
7/22/2013 c20 12sDan12
This was a good story! The plot twists were nice too, especially when you thought that things were finally going to go well for everyone. I think that the story was at a good pace. The story wasn't too slow or too fast and the chapter weren't too long or short. Overall, the story is very good and I enjoyed it :)
12sDan12This was a good story! The plot twists were nice too, especially when you thought that things were finally going to go well for everyone. I think that the story was at a good pace. The story wasn't too slow or too fast and the chapter weren't too long or short. Overall, the story is very good and I enjoyed it :)
7/11/2013 c18 2MysticPerv
Sorry for the criticism but I felt everything was happening a little too fast in this chapter but I'm pretty sure the next chapter will make up for that.
When Melanie said ' you are not my father! My dad's a blonde idiot from japan!' I immediately though how Tamaki would react to that.
I'm surprised that this is your first fanfic cause this fanfic is amazing.
2MysticPervSorry for the criticism but I felt everything was happening a little too fast in this chapter but I'm pretty sure the next chapter will make up for that.
When Melanie said ' you are not my father! My dad's a blonde idiot from japan!' I immediately though how Tamaki would react to that.
I'm surprised that this is your first fanfic cause this fanfic is amazing.