
2/25/2013 c5 Guest
Very good story altho there are multiple spelling and grammar errors first and not ad,then not ten, use "these for spoken word" but other then that a very decent story.
Very good story altho there are multiple spelling and grammar errors first and not ad,then not ten, use "these for spoken word" but other then that a very decent story.
2/24/2013 c5
4Animemonk
lol dude i am using Daryl for the name because well i gues i am gonna reveal a spoiler here. MY AME IN REAL LIFE IS DARYL. so yeah i have never seen the walking dead or whatever but thanks for the laugh i ope you see this review i made for you unominous reviewer

lol dude i am using Daryl for the name because well i gues i am gonna reveal a spoiler here. MY AME IN REAL LIFE IS DARYL. so yeah i have never seen the walking dead or whatever but thanks for the laugh i ope you see this review i made for you unominous reviewer
2/24/2013 c1 Uuuhm
I thought Daryl form The Walking Dead was going to be in this...I thought wrong...
I thought Daryl form The Walking Dead was going to be in this...I thought wrong...
2/24/2013 c5
1Bombadeus
Let me just say HOLY CRAP MAN, this is probably the second longest chapter of a story I've ever read!
I'm glad that one of the people I follow on this site suggested you for such a wonderful story, thank you.

Let me just say HOLY CRAP MAN, this is probably the second longest chapter of a story I've ever read!
I'm glad that one of the people I follow on this site suggested you for such a wonderful story, thank you.
2/15/2013 c4
1Darkria Defender
Hitmontop but by all mean evolve him into a Hitmonchan
Hello again that was a good lemon,in the words of goombario Jr. "Clean your Keyboards regularly"

Hitmontop but by all mean evolve him into a Hitmonchan
Hello again that was a good lemon,in the words of goombario Jr. "Clean your Keyboards regularly"
2/14/2013 c3 Guest
AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME
AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME
2/13/2013 c2 Darkria Defender
Dittos are the biggest trolls in the history of Pokemon (number 2 is mew)
Dittos are the biggest trolls in the history of Pokemon (number 2 is mew)