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for Kingdom Hearts: Children of Darkness, Rewritten Two Shot version

2/20/2013 c1 RandomReviewer5000
Now, what I don't like here is the fact you've got scripting for people talking. I'm sorry but it sort of makes me cringe really.
I'm not sure what to think because this is an opening and if you don't put any scripting in, I might enjoy it a bit better.

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