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11/18/2016 c5 26Fi Suki Saki
My favourite in this fic is the Romantica, Nostalgia, anything related to Misaki (because damn, Misaki, you're so popular!), and Haruhiko-san (he's really lovable here. you capture his personality so well! This is his canonical self).

I hate Sumi in here.
And IF. BIG IF Sumi have sex with Usagi, he won't be Seme. He personally look like Dominant Uke/Seke for someone like Usagi. #shuddered
But that's just my opinion. I'm glad his love toward Usagi will forever Unrequited.
4/5/2014 c5 TheKruemel
I just stumlbed across this wonderful fic and read most of it in one go, so I'm just gonna review for all the chapters, because I'm a little bit lazy - {

The entire idea is very sweet I think and you're a great writer; made me giggle and grin a few times :D I can't even decide what I liked most, they all have a certain ring to them. Keep it up :)
3/6/2014 c5 SuzukiChiyeko
I didn't even know what 'Shunbun no Hi' was xD Thanks for giving me a little more information about that.
Lol, when I read 'Java', I thought it was about the programming language. Software Engineering really messes with your brain :P Reading about Haruhiko's thoughts was very interesting.
Thanks for the update!
3/3/2014 c5 5Tentai.t
OMG! OMG! OMG! AZ! You're back! I missed you! I missed you! I missed you! Always a pleasure to learn about Japanese culture from your writings. I (obviously) especially loved the Takanos (yes, i'm jumping the gun in my head) loved the Asahinas (yes them too) and i can see the you're still not giving up Yuu's mystery lover... But i have an idea of who it might be...

I did notice two homonyms: alter (in chiaki and yoshiyuki's), plain of existence; and a missing d in nowaki's 'the problem lie'.

Please don't be gone too long again. Is it okay to beg for more?
PS *minions. Loved it!

Tentai
10/11/2013 c4 Tentai.t
This was an awesome piece. It really made the world of junjou and sekai ichi so real to me. Wonderful characterizations and well thought of situations. Kinda curious who Yuu is dating too. My favorite are the kisa and onodera ones. I especially loved the one where onodera is speaking to the supposedly sleeping takano. I love them the most! Please continue writing this whenever you have the time. I love to live the world you've spun. Kudos, Sensei.
8/17/2013 c4 T.S.S
HAHAHAHA, SUMI. OH MY GOD. THAT WAS THE BEST OF THIS CHAPTER. LOL I had to stay logged out cause' I'd ruin my entire signed review when I want to review the chapter as a whole, BUT THAT WAS THE BEST.
8/17/2013 c4 deleted112216
Egoist: ""The fuck I do, get a hold of yourself!" Kamijou snarled, using his hand to keep Nowaki at a safe distance."- cracked me up so bad. LOL. I see Nowaki is moving in for the seduction. ;)

The idea of spending an eternity with Nowaki was actually quite appealing. - I tend to agree with this thought. Bring it on!

This whole little section was rather sweet.

Takahiro: I like the idea of kid Misaki. But I can't say the same about his brother. By the way his wife's name is actually Manami, not Nanami.

Nostalgia: This one was sad in the beginning but endearing by the end, a quality I like about this pairing in general. I love reading them.

Sardonica: And now for the stars of the story... aka my favorites, the ever hot Sardonica! I care not that I am their sole cheerleader! Love how Sumi goads the man so expertly. ;) Yes, go ahead and taste the rest of the forbidden fruit, Sumi. You have my blessing.

Mistake: Another portion I adore. This time I am squeeing over the fluff in it. I adore their history together.

Romantica: Misaki is cute here. I enjoyed his inner monologue.

Some small typos - "If you aren't cold, then why are you shaking, little MIsaki?" - Misaki's I is capitalized

Because you're body is too close! -your body

Domestica: I think Chiaki should be selfish in this instance. He's within his right to do so! I'd like to witness their reveal.

Ijuuin: I agree that he is crossing a line here, and I don't like it one bit. So glad that Misaki stood up to him, and that Haruhiko showed up and did the honorable act of walking the kid home.

Poetica: Misaki buying him chocolate cake, I see? Lol, that has me all sorts of giddy as I'm sure you can imagine. I liked the end line about it not feeling strange to use the elder brother's given name. Misaki needs more friends!

Trifecta: Sweet little family as always. I giggled like a madwoman when I spotted Yoko's underwear lying about. It would appear someone saw some action the previous night. ;) As well as Yoko's fine posterior getting love at the end of the section. Not that I blame Kiri. I would do the same.

Aikawa: Nice, a new section is added! I always liked Aikawa so it's good to see her here. You'll have to tell me whom you had pictured as her significant other.

Tero: LOL, Shinobu orchestrated quite the strategy there to get things to go as he desired. I wouldn't expect anything less though, from him.

and Shinobu, lips red and swollen, looked Miyagi in the eyes. "I rented a motel about twenty minutes from here. After we pay our respects, let's get it on," he said in a HUSKY voice. Miyagi laughed and pulled the kid in for a hug. "Never change, Shinobu," he GIGGLED.

Those capitalized words... they pretty much sum up this duo in a nutshell. Shinobu is such a stud, and Miyagi his fair maiden! Or at least that's how I like to picture it.

Erotica: This was HOT! lol I am enjoying it quite a bit ;)

Yuu: This was another good one. Still holding out for this tale to be expanded!

Mino: His kidlets are so cute.
8/13/2013 c4 SuzukiChiyeko
Aww, Nowaki was so cute in this. He's truly a sweetheart, just like Ritsu :)
Ugh, is it just me or is Ijuuin super pushy? Haruhiko, on the other hand, seems to be willing to be in friends instead xD Maybe that's why I prefer Haruhiko.
Thanks for the update! It was very sweet :3
6/15/2013 c1 27Carrot-Bunny
I'm reading this when I'm supposed to be doing a Chemistry report, but who cares? Any time is BL time for me XD

I'd love to review each little snapshot one by one, but all the awesomeness is overwhelming me, so I'll just say this: Brilliant. Please keep writing.

Hope to see more of your work :)
4/26/2013 c3 1Jackattack456
Is the guy Yukina was talking to Morinaga from koisuru boukun?(or in English, The Tyrant Falls In Love.)

I loved this chapter! My favorite one was probably Romantica (so f#cking cute!) but I also loved them all. Wonderful job!
4/21/2013 c3 T.S.S
THIS IS WHAT I GET FOR TYPING TOO QUICK. SUMI'S LINE* NOT LIFE. Though, that could work too xD
4/21/2013 c3 T.S.S
I am such a bad reviewer, but you know where I've been...so I should be excused! I'm logged out cause I want to leave a little one, then I will log in later and leave a better one.

This story never fails to amuse me. Sumi's life was priceless. Haru is just the kind person no one ever sees him as...and poor Misaki's rump. So sweet of Aki to take care of him though...in a way that actually different involve his tongue.

How Misaki told Ijuuin off, that's how I think he'll eventually react down the line in the manga. The guy is becoming a bit too... creepy in my eyes.

I'll be back!
4/16/2013 c3 43lionfish13
Another excellent chapter :)

I especially liked:

Mistake - especially when Isaka says, "My cock would very much like to feel the insides of you," he breathed huskily. "I need you to take my manhood and ride it; it's the only way to take care of me right now."

Wonderfully forward!

The whole Sumi/Usagi story was great - I loved that interesting twist that in his novel, Usagi chose Sumi over Misaki - lots of potential for psychological analysis there ;) And Sumi's parting shot, calling Usagi his uke, was hilarious!

Terrorist - Aw, Shinobu tries so hard, and even when his cooking is improving, to put TEN whole cloves of garlic into each piece of bread?! LOL! Poor kid. Though so adorable.

Egoist - I love Hiroki's 'I'm cold' catchphrase, so loved Nowaki appropriating it for his own use - and poor Hiroki's reaction was so typical but so funny.

Excellent! I wonder what the next holiday will be :)
4/14/2013 c3 3Alana-kittychan
Aw these are all so cute :)
4/14/2013 c3 SuzukiChiyeko
Poor Haruhiko. He's trying so hard to help Misaki out and the boy still refuses to take the ride all the way home. Misaki can be so stubborn sometimes; he shouldn't walk home having a fever! D: Bad Misaki!
I'm really getting the feeling that I learn more about Trifecta and Mistake by reading this fanfiction xD I've never read any of the novels, and there aren't many chapters in the original manga series.
Can I just say that all of the parts were absolutely adorable? Well, except for the Sardonica and Misaki/Ijuuin part. Ijuuin is turning more and more into a stalker :P Those parts weren't exactly sweet, but still very well-written.
Thank you for this special! :)
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