for Please Don't Go12/16/2014 c1 
1Justanotherfiveminutes
Sigh. Nearly 2 years on from you writing this and I'm completely in love with it. Brilliantly smutty but also tender, it's a difficult line uk walk and you get it just right here. Thank you!
1JustanotherfiveminutesSigh. Nearly 2 years on from you writing this and I'm completely in love with it. Brilliantly smutty but also tender, it's a difficult line uk walk and you get it just right here. Thank you!
10/27/2014 c1 14livingdeadblondequeen
So glad I read this, the smut was super hot and their moment at the end was very sweet. Thank you for writing.
14livingdeadblondequeenSo glad I read this, the smut was super hot and their moment at the end was very sweet. Thank you for writing.
10/25/2014 c1 Destiny
I love this drabble it was written so beautifully! I hope one day you'll consider continuing the story! I loved it!
I love this drabble it was written so beautifully! I hope one day you'll consider continuing the story! I loved it!
10/25/2014 c1 13ssklarolinewrites
I love this so much. I know it's older now, but still incredible and I still want them to be this way together. Thank you
13ssklarolinewritesI love this so much. I know it's older now, but still incredible and I still want them to be this way together. Thank you
4/8/2013 c1 B
One of my favorite Klaroline pieces. I 3 them together, and I think Klaus probably would have given her a dream like this if the show was on Showtime instead of CW. Perfect, and believable as canon.
One of my favorite Klaroline pieces. I 3 them together, and I think Klaus probably would have given her a dream like this if the show was on Showtime instead of CW. Perfect, and believable as canon.
2/14/2013 c1 justine
wow ! so magnificent and intense
and also breathtaking the shower
between caroline and klaus !
wow ! so magnificent and intense
and also breathtaking the shower
between caroline and klaus !
2/14/2013 c1 RichTequila
If only. Even though Klaus is all crazy psycho killer and Caroline is all light and epic'ee it would be great for them to be together. There's something about a forbidden romance that sucks people in. The ending was a cute little touch after her steamy dream.
If only. Even though Klaus is all crazy psycho killer and Caroline is all light and epic'ee it would be great for them to be together. There's something about a forbidden romance that sucks people in. The ending was a cute little touch after her steamy dream.
2/13/2013 c1 10SweetTemptation2
"She heard the click of the shower door and seconds later felt strong arms wrap around her waist, pulling her close."
Holy crap you just start right away! I'm ALREADY squealing! The song is so perfect for this setting right now too. I love it!
His fingers caressing her. STAHP STAHP STAHP! I CAN'T BREEEAAATHEEEE!
"He placed his mouth next to her ear and kissed her lobe gently. Caroline shivered and whimpered slightly in response."
ASDFGHJKL! This actually sent chills down my spine! This whole moment and the song playing with it is KILLING ME!
"He was magnificent. He wasn’t overly muscular, but every part of him was tight and well-defined. He was lean and sharp and so stunning he took her breath away."
How do you describe everything about Klaus' physique so flawlessly in just three sentences! HOW! This makes me ache. I want to see shirtless Klaus so badly now!
"before he drew her hand away and brought it to his chest to rest over his heart. The gesture, so tender and unexpected, tightened her throat with emotion."
OH MY GOOODDD! I CAN'T GO ON. YOU HAVE KILLED ME.
"“All yours.” He whispered in answer to her earlier thoughts. She knew he was referring to his heart as well as his body."
WOW I KNEW I SHOULD HAVE TAKEN A BREAK BECAUSE AHHHHHH I CANNOT DO THIS! YOU'RE RUINING MY LIFE! THIS OH MY GOD THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL AND THE MUSIC. I'M GOING TO MENTION THE MUSIC A LOT BECAUSE I LOVE IT. He was referring to his heart as well as his body. He's giving himself to her. All of him. Oh I can't!
"'Klaus.' His name came out in a breathless whisper. His eyes closed and he sighed heavily when he heard it."
He just wants her to admit it! asdfghjkl and she does! Dream or not! SHE DOES!
"Klaus’ voice was low and she wondered if he was deliberately weaving a spell around her."
THIS SO FUCKING MUCH! I swear! His voice just has this effect on you. It's so enticing! And there's no other way to describe it other than him weaving a spell on you!
"Caroline’s reaction was automatic and she felt his hands tighten on her waist, keeping her in place. His eyes dropped and he looked like a broken little boy. "
HELP I'M HYPERVENTILATING BECAUSE THAT FACE! I AM PICTURING THAT FACE AND OH MY GODD AHKSJDSHSKJKK IT IS KILLING ME! THAT IS THE FACE THAT DESTROYS MY LIFE! The way he has the ability to look so ruthless and then so innocent, angelic, broken, pained, childlike. IT KILLS MEEE!
"She felt herself being drawn toward him, her eyes kept drifting to his mouth and his pink lips, that she’d imagined were softer than any others. She felt his hands slide from her waist up her back and into her hair and he sighed visibly. She licked her lips and his eyes followed her tongue. He wanted to kiss her, she could tell. She wanted it too, so bad. But she shouldn’t give in to it. "
ALL OF THIS TENSION IS SO TANGIBLE. YOU CAN CUT IT WITH A KNIFE. IT MAKES MY INSIDES HURT! He sighs visibly! I don't know why but I really LOVE it when Klaus sighs. Just let yourself have it Caroline! You clearly want it! There's no denying it now! Everything is making me screech like a pterodactyl right now!
"She could see that he was genuinely sorry that he’d hurt her. There was a vulnerability that was there only for her and there was a desire that matched her own. "
STOP STOP STAHHHPPP! A VULNERABILITY ONLY FOR HER! A DESIRE MATCHING HER OWN! ASDFGHJKKJHGFGHJ I'M SO FUCKING DEAD RIGHT NOW!
"Suddenly the ringing of her phone broke the spell of silence around them and he let her go. "
FUCK YOU, PHONE.
"Caroline climb off of his lap and Klaus held onto her hand until she passed through the invisible barrier. She walked backwards, unable to take her eyes off of him until she bumped into Elena’s kitchen counter. "
OH MY GOD YOU KILL ME TILL THE VERY END! GAHHH I CANNOT DO THIS RIGHT NOW! I CANT BREAAATTHHHEE! This moment got me screaming. It makes me feel so light. The way he holds onto her hand until he can't anymore. I can just picture that! And just asfgahjksldf. And her walking backwards, keeping her eyes locked with his was such a nice detail! As much as she tries, she can't pull herself away from him!
This whole thing was hot! And it wasn't just sex. It was full of sweet, tender, sensual moments. It was slow. The song was perfect because it made the whole thing feel slower, and more intimate. It was perfect! It just made me ache. It was the slow and affectionate. Romantic. The whole drabble just made me feel so warm and light. Thank you thank you thank you for writing this! I love you Kirsten!
10SweetTemptation2"She heard the click of the shower door and seconds later felt strong arms wrap around her waist, pulling her close."
Holy crap you just start right away! I'm ALREADY squealing! The song is so perfect for this setting right now too. I love it!
His fingers caressing her. STAHP STAHP STAHP! I CAN'T BREEEAAATHEEEE!
"He placed his mouth next to her ear and kissed her lobe gently. Caroline shivered and whimpered slightly in response."
ASDFGHJKL! This actually sent chills down my spine! This whole moment and the song playing with it is KILLING ME!
"He was magnificent. He wasn’t overly muscular, but every part of him was tight and well-defined. He was lean and sharp and so stunning he took her breath away."
How do you describe everything about Klaus' physique so flawlessly in just three sentences! HOW! This makes me ache. I want to see shirtless Klaus so badly now!
"before he drew her hand away and brought it to his chest to rest over his heart. The gesture, so tender and unexpected, tightened her throat with emotion."
OH MY GOOODDD! I CAN'T GO ON. YOU HAVE KILLED ME.
"“All yours.” He whispered in answer to her earlier thoughts. She knew he was referring to his heart as well as his body."
WOW I KNEW I SHOULD HAVE TAKEN A BREAK BECAUSE AHHHHHH I CANNOT DO THIS! YOU'RE RUINING MY LIFE! THIS OH MY GOD THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL AND THE MUSIC. I'M GOING TO MENTION THE MUSIC A LOT BECAUSE I LOVE IT. He was referring to his heart as well as his body. He's giving himself to her. All of him. Oh I can't!
"'Klaus.' His name came out in a breathless whisper. His eyes closed and he sighed heavily when he heard it."
He just wants her to admit it! asdfghjkl and she does! Dream or not! SHE DOES!
"Klaus’ voice was low and she wondered if he was deliberately weaving a spell around her."
THIS SO FUCKING MUCH! I swear! His voice just has this effect on you. It's so enticing! And there's no other way to describe it other than him weaving a spell on you!
"Caroline’s reaction was automatic and she felt his hands tighten on her waist, keeping her in place. His eyes dropped and he looked like a broken little boy. "
HELP I'M HYPERVENTILATING BECAUSE THAT FACE! I AM PICTURING THAT FACE AND OH MY GODD AHKSJDSHSKJKK IT IS KILLING ME! THAT IS THE FACE THAT DESTROYS MY LIFE! The way he has the ability to look so ruthless and then so innocent, angelic, broken, pained, childlike. IT KILLS MEEE!
"She felt herself being drawn toward him, her eyes kept drifting to his mouth and his pink lips, that she’d imagined were softer than any others. She felt his hands slide from her waist up her back and into her hair and he sighed visibly. She licked her lips and his eyes followed her tongue. He wanted to kiss her, she could tell. She wanted it too, so bad. But she shouldn’t give in to it. "
ALL OF THIS TENSION IS SO TANGIBLE. YOU CAN CUT IT WITH A KNIFE. IT MAKES MY INSIDES HURT! He sighs visibly! I don't know why but I really LOVE it when Klaus sighs. Just let yourself have it Caroline! You clearly want it! There's no denying it now! Everything is making me screech like a pterodactyl right now!
"She could see that he was genuinely sorry that he’d hurt her. There was a vulnerability that was there only for her and there was a desire that matched her own. "
STOP STOP STAHHHPPP! A VULNERABILITY ONLY FOR HER! A DESIRE MATCHING HER OWN! ASDFGHJKKJHGFGHJ I'M SO FUCKING DEAD RIGHT NOW!
"Suddenly the ringing of her phone broke the spell of silence around them and he let her go. "
FUCK YOU, PHONE.
"Caroline climb off of his lap and Klaus held onto her hand until she passed through the invisible barrier. She walked backwards, unable to take her eyes off of him until she bumped into Elena’s kitchen counter. "
OH MY GOD YOU KILL ME TILL THE VERY END! GAHHH I CANNOT DO THIS RIGHT NOW! I CANT BREAAATTHHHEE! This moment got me screaming. It makes me feel so light. The way he holds onto her hand until he can't anymore. I can just picture that! And just asfgahjksldf. And her walking backwards, keeping her eyes locked with his was such a nice detail! As much as she tries, she can't pull herself away from him!
This whole thing was hot! And it wasn't just sex. It was full of sweet, tender, sensual moments. It was slow. The song was perfect because it made the whole thing feel slower, and more intimate. It was perfect! It just made me ache. It was the slow and affectionate. Romantic. The whole drabble just made me feel so warm and light. Thank you thank you thank you for writing this! I love you Kirsten!