
9/9 c17 Daemoniorum
Really enjoyed reading this. Wondering what rank Naruto would have started at if it had been finished.
Really enjoyed reading this. Wondering what rank Naruto would have started at if it had been finished.
8/11 c17 Daffa
Continue this story
Continue this story
8/2 c17 Guest
Bruh... I'm offended if the story doesn't end
Bruh... I'm offended if the story doesn't end
7/17 c17 Guest
Hopefully you bring back this legendary piece of work back as well.
Hopefully you bring back this legendary piece of work back as well.
1/13 c6 Guest
This don't need to get rewritten jiraiya cannot be the father add in OC character with blue eyes so it's a piece of believable
This don't need to get rewritten jiraiya cannot be the father add in OC character with blue eyes so it's a piece of believable
11/28/2022 c10 JustbeingRylie
I mean why would you do this... I thought you would at least wait until they were older...
I mean why would you do this... I thought you would at least wait until they were older...
11/28/2022 c7 JustbeingRylie
Hiya. I don't think you should have made Naruto create the rasengan. I think you should have let Minato create it in a later chapter and then had Naruto learn and improve it. I just think it's kind of shitty to steal that achievement from Minato and give it to an already powerful Naruto.
Hiya. I don't think you should have made Naruto create the rasengan. I think you should have let Minato create it in a later chapter and then had Naruto learn and improve it. I just think it's kind of shitty to steal that achievement from Minato and give it to an already powerful Naruto.