for HALO: The Chain4/23/2022 c9 Nate
Yawn - another shitty Halsey hatefic.
Yawn - another shitty Halsey hatefic.
5/10/2016 c5 
6justreidabook
Good story, but too lovy-dovy for my tastes. Plus, the Spartan 4s seriously need to be needed. They were never this effective.
6justreidabookGood story, but too lovy-dovy for my tastes. Plus, the Spartan 4s seriously need to be needed. They were never this effective.
11/14/2015 c12 Guest
more please.
HunterWolf
more please.
HunterWolf
8/19/2015 c12 Lord quinn
Please continue this story
Please continue this story
3/30/2015 c12 AngryFan
WHEN WILL THIS AWESOMENESS CONTINUE!?
WHEN WILL THIS AWESOMENESS CONTINUE!?
1/1/2015 c12 BlackLightW
Are you ever gonna continue this?
I'm sorry if that sounded rude, but since Nightstalker just finished the second story I would really like to see the gap he left between the first and second story filled. You were doing a wonderfull job too. So please don't give up on this.
Are you ever gonna continue this?
I'm sorry if that sounded rude, but since Nightstalker just finished the second story I would really like to see the gap he left between the first and second story filled. You were doing a wonderfull job too. So please don't give up on this.
12/21/2014 c7 6evevee
"Lance" is too emotionally compromised to perform as a Spartan. If he even reached this point, which is doubtful, he would be removed and probably discharged for disregarding mission parameters and disobeying engagement rules. Plus, why are you having psychological therapy be a main arc in this story?
6evevee"Lance" is too emotionally compromised to perform as a Spartan. If he even reached this point, which is doubtful, he would be removed and probably discharged for disregarding mission parameters and disobeying engagement rules. Plus, why are you having psychological therapy be a main arc in this story?
12/12/2014 c12 James Ryan
When is the next update?
When is the next update?
11/19/2014 c12 Guest
Is this story dead or just on hiatus?
Is this story dead or just on hiatus?