for HALO: The Chain2/15/2013 c1 Denalian
Damn this is good, but it's better with characters from republic commando series, but now it's awesome to include nightstalker's story. Anyway this isn't umm copywrite or plaugerism( can't spell while holding a child to sleep lol) oh wait you did ask well umm scrath my last sentence lol As I said in the first sentence this is awesome, keep up the word lad damn ...he woke up gotta go get his bottle see ya laddie
Damn this is good, but it's better with characters from republic commando series, but now it's awesome to include nightstalker's story. Anyway this isn't umm copywrite or plaugerism( can't spell while holding a child to sleep lol) oh wait you did ask well umm scrath my last sentence lol As I said in the first sentence this is awesome, keep up the word lad damn ...he woke up gotta go get his bottle see ya laddie
2/15/2013 c1 
1JediSpectre177
Very good MElee... I look forward to the next. I do have a few criticisms such as Anakin not being darth vader and Grievous being killed by someone else (not kenobi) but I'm guessing they can be solved by reading the other guys fan fic so never mind. Anyway I find it well written and as already said look forward to the next ch.
1JediSpectre177Very good MElee... I look forward to the next. I do have a few criticisms such as Anakin not being darth vader and Grievous being killed by someone else (not kenobi) but I'm guessing they can be solved by reading the other guys fan fic so never mind. Anyway I find it well written and as already said look forward to the next ch.