for Naruto: the chakra molder6/2 c6 Brian
No no NO! I wanted Anko to love Naruto! NOT Iruka! WTF?! Iruka and Anko have NOTHING in common! Iruka is a schoolteacher who loves teaching her is calm, patient and a rule follower. Anko loves her job torturing people and being an assassin. Anko is impulsive, passionate and fun loving, just like Naruto. Naruto like Anko is an outcast. Only Naruto can relate to Anko. So I am now dropping this story. Goodbye.
No no NO! I wanted Anko to love Naruto! NOT Iruka! WTF?! Iruka and Anko have NOTHING in common! Iruka is a schoolteacher who loves teaching her is calm, patient and a rule follower. Anko loves her job torturing people and being an assassin. Anko is impulsive, passionate and fun loving, just like Naruto. Naruto like Anko is an outcast. Only Naruto can relate to Anko. So I am now dropping this story. Goodbye.
6/2 c4 Brian
Just please have Anko love Naruto. Please
Just please have Anko love Naruto. Please
5/12 c2 
3Gold.D.Draco
Bro see that’s what i hate about shonen mc, when they get beaten badly, then they want to call upon the external force they have within themselves and don’t even thank that External force once that force helps them out of difficulty situation and then just bluntly argue with it sometimes don’t even bother to ask about its past or why did he or it do the things it does but still just blindly believe what others say about it and hate it as well I’m excluding One Piece on this since luffy doesn’t have it what I’m talking
3Gold.D.DracoBro see that’s what i hate about shonen mc, when they get beaten badly, then they want to call upon the external force they have within themselves and don’t even thank that External force once that force helps them out of difficulty situation and then just bluntly argue with it sometimes don’t even bother to ask about its past or why did he or it do the things it does but still just blindly believe what others say about it and hate it as well I’m excluding One Piece on this since luffy doesn’t have it what I’m talking
4/6 c3 InViiBlE
It is kinda weird to have Hinata say man in her thoughts and so is hiruzen but I get that it is the third chapter it just kinda ruin my imagination
It is kinda weird to have Hinata say man in her thoughts and so is hiruzen but I get that it is the third chapter it just kinda ruin my imagination
11/16/2024 c80 Zero4590
Wonder how long its gonna take the old perv to realize Hinata would not be good for his material cause she is acting it out?
Wonder how long its gonna take the old perv to realize Hinata would not be good for his material cause she is acting it out?
7/31/2024 c17 Zero4590
if you want to use that idea that someone likes sweet food again use Red Bean Soup.
if you want to use that idea that someone likes sweet food again use Red Bean Soup.
6/29/2024 c26 Zero4590
So you have Hanabi doing the same as Hinata did. Interesting. And appreciated. Though if Sakura and Hanabi caught themselves doing the same thing it would be hilarious. Also, again, appreciated because I felt Naruto should have the love of the girl he wanted to. Not settle be cause Sakura was an idiot for chasing a man that tried to kill her. And sorry about the many reviews but I treat them as comments.
So you have Hanabi doing the same as Hinata did. Interesting. And appreciated. Though if Sakura and Hanabi caught themselves doing the same thing it would be hilarious. Also, again, appreciated because I felt Naruto should have the love of the girl he wanted to. Not settle be cause Sakura was an idiot for chasing a man that tried to kill her. And sorry about the many reviews but I treat them as comments.
6/29/2024 c25 Zero4590
First part was meant for the last chapter. P1: Finally Sakura is beginning to realize Sasuke is no good for anybody. P2: Hopefully Hanabi gets her shot soon and Sakura joins the harem too.
First part was meant for the last chapter. P1: Finally Sakura is beginning to realize Sasuke is no good for anybody. P2: Hopefully Hanabi gets her shot soon and Sakura joins the harem too.
6/29/2024 c23 Zero4590
Damn. At least this way you avoided the goofy stories of him being banished for completing the mission he was given. Even though I still read them just to see the suffering the village deals with afterwards. Though it's almost always the same.
Damn. At least this way you avoided the goofy stories of him being banished for completing the mission he was given. Even though I still read them just to see the suffering the village deals with afterwards. Though it's almost always the same.
6/29/2024 c21 Zero4590
No need to change it by my standards. He should have killed that bastard. Hell I would have castrated him first.
No need to change it by my standards. He should have killed that bastard. Hell I would have castrated him first.
6/29/2024 c2 Zero4590
Haku being a boy was one of many mistakes Author dude made. I know his name just refuse to use it due to the fact he screwed up a helluva show.
Haku being a boy was one of many mistakes Author dude made. I know his name just refuse to use it due to the fact he screwed up a helluva show.