for Violent10/30/2005 c2 Guest
I really like your story please update
I really like your story please update
8/23/2003 c2 
10Anime-05
AAw..poor thing. I hope you continue soon, so I can get a better grasp of exactly who's doing what, and how it got this far.
Ja!
10Anime-05AAw..poor thing. I hope you continue soon, so I can get a better grasp of exactly who's doing what, and how it got this far.
Ja!
5/5/2003 c2 Equinox
I'm impressed. I hope you have more.
I'm impressed. I hope you have more.
4/10/2003 c2 12brattax23
Interesting story. I'm curious to see the interactions between the characters. Can't wait for the next chapter.
12brattax23Interesting story. I'm curious to see the interactions between the characters. Can't wait for the next chapter.
9/14/2002 c1 Matt
Love it was great...can't wait until its continued
Love it was great...can't wait until its continued
8/11/2002 c1 6Neurotic Temptress
Intriguing. I wonder where you'll be taking this fic. Excellent work on describing each scene! I'll be on the look-out for Chapter 2! : )
6Neurotic TemptressIntriguing. I wonder where you'll be taking this fic. Excellent work on describing each scene! I'll be on the look-out for Chapter 2! : )
8/10/2002 c1 Storm13
remy lebeau ios a kid... you do realise half the woman on fanfiction are now avoiding you like the plaque? Lol joking, I like this, it's a very original take.
remy lebeau ios a kid... you do realise half the woman on fanfiction are now avoiding you like the plaque? Lol joking, I like this, it's a very original take.
8/9/2002 c1 kitty
This has started very well. Full of action and the confusion of a child this young. You've got me wondering when exactly this is taking place, so I hope there is more soon.
This has started very well. Full of action and the confusion of a child this young. You've got me wondering when exactly this is taking place, so I hope there is more soon.
8/9/2002 c1 BJ
Wow Coke, really powerful beginning. It's amazingly vivid, I'll be" seeing"
this story all day. Please don't make us wait too too long for more, please?
Wow Coke, really powerful beginning. It's amazingly vivid, I'll be" seeing"
this story all day. Please don't make us wait too too long for more, please?
8/9/2002 c1 Puck
I don't review often but wow. Keep going in the name of all that is holy keep it up.
I don't review often but wow. Keep going in the name of all that is holy keep it up.