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12/22/2020 c8 OmaBlack
For someone who does not speak English as a first language, you are doing extremely well. From an American adult perspective it reads very much like a young English writer. Without knowing English is your second language I would have guessed that you would have been a pre teenager to early teenage years in writing, and English as your first language. good job keep it up the more you write the easier it'll become and the more fluid.
5/11/2020 c11 Nagilover4ever
Love this story. Wish there was more.
4/9/2020 c11 6CelestialWings65
Absolutely love the story so far! Also congratulates on the birth of your twin daughters!
11/5/2019 c1 violetstorys
james Charlus... why did u name him that?
8/2/2018 c11 mumphie
Not bad - would like to see what direction you would take the story.
1/28/2018 c11 Bosma19
Please update
1/27/2018 c8 2xrysatsan
NEXTTTTTT!
9/24/2017 c11 Christa
I love this story please continue the story
9/24/2017 c11 Guest
congtatulations on the twinz
1/4/2017 c1 abigailsumpter7
please I want some sirius and harry father and son bonding
11/13/2016 c10 AstherRose Madison
hey I really like this story! I hope you find time to write soon but don't rush or anything. like his pranking!
8/31/2016 c11 Albionia
Don't worry. Real life always comes first. I look forward to it continuing when you can ;).
8/30/2016 c11 amata0221
Congratulations!
8/29/2016 c2 WingsOfThePhoenix205
Hi, i just wanted to inform u that 4 year olds r able to speak pretty well. I work with children and i have never heard a 4 year old speaking like how u portrayed harry, unless he had a learning disability. I just wanted to tell u so u could make it more realistic
7/13/2015 c10 Fallow52
Kudos :)
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