for Birth of the Forest4/27 c15 apex11599
I think im done. You making kushina a traitor to konoha for pain is to much and feels so forced. Pain has never had the ability to control the people hes revived. You just pulled that out your ass for drama. As well as making naruto so damn naïve in rhis one instance.
I think im done. You making kushina a traitor to konoha for pain is to much and feels so forced. Pain has never had the ability to control the people hes revived. You just pulled that out your ass for drama. As well as making naruto so damn naïve in rhis one instance.
4/27 c15 apex11599
This is so fucking stupid. The way Kushina acted with kiri and sasuke is suspicious and your telling me hes not gonna listen to kurama when he says he cant trust kushina. So fucking dumb i love the fic but this is stupid. And it makes no sense. Hashirama would be suspicious as hell with all his experience in war.
This is so fucking stupid. The way Kushina acted with kiri and sasuke is suspicious and your telling me hes not gonna listen to kurama when he says he cant trust kushina. So fucking dumb i love the fic but this is stupid. And it makes no sense. Hashirama would be suspicious as hell with all his experience in war.
1/14 c1 Pat9921
yeah Sasuke didn't notice shit in the puddle he was surprised as well but he took to it better than naruto and sakura and went out to fight the nukenin in canon so please tell me how does this sauke just know what is up that only readers knows.
good god man this is some shitty writing in 2 chapters alone
yeah Sasuke didn't notice shit in the puddle he was surprised as well but he took to it better than naruto and sakura and went out to fight the nukenin in canon so please tell me how does this sauke just know what is up that only readers knows.
good god man this is some shitty writing in 2 chapters alone
1/14 c1 Pat9921
yeah sasuke doesn't have his killing intent so what is up with that. be a little consistent with canon man but make changes that are done by your first change. for chapter 2
yeah sasuke doesn't have his killing intent so what is up with that. be a little consistent with canon man but make changes that are done by your first change. for chapter 2
1/14 c2 Pat9921
instead of kurama calling him hashirama eould have been better it was asura but he still mainatined his personality of naruto although toned down as the memories will probably change him
instead of kurama calling him hashirama eould have been better it was asura but he still mainatined his personality of naruto although toned down as the memories will probably change him
1/14 c2 Pat9921
why would anyone know about the torturing of sasuke and about tsukoyomi?! there were like 2 managekyo sharingan in the uchiha at the time of the massacre and i don't think even most of the uchiha knew about who possessed them? the readers know about it but the characters dont,think twice before you write
why would anyone know about the torturing of sasuke and about tsukoyomi?! there were like 2 managekyo sharingan in the uchiha at the time of the massacre and i don't think even most of the uchiha knew about who possessed them? the readers know about it but the characters dont,think twice before you write
11/28/2024 c22 mattias.akerlund.71
Kushina deserves a good hard kick up her c##t... Minato can't be resurrected, his soul is sealed in the Shinigami's stomach... Not much of a seal mistress lol...
Kushina deserves a good hard kick up her c##t... Minato can't be resurrected, his soul is sealed in the Shinigami's stomach... Not much of a seal mistress lol...
10/10/2024 c1 Xiamen
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I hope I'm not causing any trouble. I read Birth Of The Forest and genuinely liked it. I've been thinking about adapting your story into my comic style and would be very happy to do so. I believe you will be pleased, and perhaps you might consider sharing it. Another thing, I'm a skilled digital artist who is now available for commissions. We can discuss it further or connect on Discord if you're interested. I would be happy if you allow me to translate this beautiful story into a comic format. Let's connect on Discord or through DMs if you agree. I would be very happy if you give me the chance to turn this beautiful story into a comic. Here Is my Discord ID cubanmir
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