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12/7/2013 c5 rob
they are trash and should be refered as such ie trash-sensei if he even calls kakashi sensei
12/7/2013 c5 a certain reading fan
Good chapter!
12/7/2013 c5 10ultima-owner
Neji the fatelist will be stopped cold
12/7/2013 c5 7windfox90
Very exciting chapter I'm so looking forward to how strong Naruto will get by the time he fights Neji in the finals I hope Urahana teaches Naruto Shunpo
12/7/2013 c5 ImagineBreaker7
Well that was interesting, I wonder how the finals will go? What will be people's reaction to Shirayuki's Shikai? I can't wait to find out.
12/7/2013 c4 windfox90
Very good I like how Naruto handle himself also keep this strictly Naruto x Sode no Shirayuki
12/7/2013 c3 windfox90
Nice Naruto finally learned Sode no Shirayuki name
12/7/2013 c2 windfox90
Sweet chapter I like it
12/7/2013 c1 windfox90
Good start to the story
12/7/2013 c5 1ddcj1990
Man I really enjoyed this chapter very much Im glad that you made this strictly Naruto x Sode no Shirayuki pairing also I like how Naruto handle Kiba I cant wait to read the next chapter and find out what else Urahara will teach Naruto
12/7/2013 c5 5Shinkicker
Nice. Great to see a new chapter, hope to see more soon. Me think Neji is in for some shock against Naruto. Even if he is expecting odd Chakra-less attacks, Naruto has quite a range of them, although some require long incantations. But then there is Sode no Shirayuki, that will be great hopefully he learns more of her dances (which I can't remember the names of now it's been so long - hakyuren? That's that wall of blast of ice yeah?) before the fight - turning the stadium into a localised version of the Siberian wastes would be funny, although I guess the big stuff will be saved for Gaara.

Oh and you did give Sasuke the mark, a little disappointing, but oh we'll, can't really complain.

Pale Lightning is a similar level the the Red Fire Cannon yeah? Could be a good one for him to use.

Thanks for posting.
12/7/2013 c5 73Dis Lexic
please update soon! please dont make us poor, inosent fans suffer by making us wait to read about Naruto kicking Nejis ass.
12/7/2013 c5 Argorok
Excellent story so far, please keep up the good work.
12/7/2013 c5 StrongGuy159
Cool chapter continue please.
12/7/2013 c5 3higfig
A few spelling mistakes here and there like when you had "not" instead of "naught", but they were only small and ignorable things.

Not much progression in the chapter overall, with the only things really happening was the conversation/dancing with Shirayuki and Sasuke getting the curse mark. That's understandable though considering it's the preliminaries.

Good chapter in its entirety though, and I look forward to the next one.
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