for Interest10/23/2013 c1 
2Alexia-90-20
Now I get to comment:
Two words... TOO CUTE! X3
(Sorry for never replying, I haven't been able to comment on it and when I was able to, I forgot :'(
2Alexia-90-20Now I get to comment:
Two words... TOO CUTE! X3
(Sorry for never replying, I haven't been able to comment on it and when I was able to, I forgot :'(
2/21/2013 c1 19Lord Kelvin
You spent ten minutes on this gift.
When you forget to include a summary, I call it cutting corners. Why post this on the biggest fanfic archive in the world? You could have sent this via a text message. It's so short it would fit well within budget.
It's kind of cute to have an OC date a doll, though. Why date real imaginary characters if you can have a fake one? Gives a new meaning to the Shadow x Omega pairings.
The fic is too shallow in every sense to make a good first impression. For a story entitled "Interest", it's not much on the interesting side. It starts off with a bored character, a sign it was written out of boredom, for boredom. Not interest.
Some gifts are refunded.
Have a nice, abuse-free day.
19Lord KelvinYou spent ten minutes on this gift.
When you forget to include a summary, I call it cutting corners. Why post this on the biggest fanfic archive in the world? You could have sent this via a text message. It's so short it would fit well within budget.
It's kind of cute to have an OC date a doll, though. Why date real imaginary characters if you can have a fake one? Gives a new meaning to the Shadow x Omega pairings.
The fic is too shallow in every sense to make a good first impression. For a story entitled "Interest", it's not much on the interesting side. It starts off with a bored character, a sign it was written out of boredom, for boredom. Not interest.
Some gifts are refunded.
Have a nice, abuse-free day.