6/22/2014 c1 18WhiteFeather1965
I'd say not bad for a first fic. It can only get better from here. You have a gift for the written word. Hone it. Use it. Most important of all: Don't give up on it. Hope to see more from you.
I'd say not bad for a first fic. It can only get better from here. You have a gift for the written word. Hone it. Use it. Most important of all: Don't give up on it. Hope to see more from you.
2/28/2013 c1 kyleeadams123
LOL
soooooooo cute
not bad for your first, actually i think it is great!
YAY YOU!
LOL
soooooooo cute
not bad for your first, actually i think it is great!
YAY YOU!
2/20/2013 c1 Guest
That wasn't crappy. It was hilarious. In my opinion, if a fic is pretty well written in terms of spelling, grammar, and punctuation, that makes up for an odd storyline. Definitely OOC, but you made that clear and it wasn't so OOC that it was unbelievable. Good job. I'd love to read more like this.
That wasn't crappy. It was hilarious. In my opinion, if a fic is pretty well written in terms of spelling, grammar, and punctuation, that makes up for an odd storyline. Definitely OOC, but you made that clear and it wasn't so OOC that it was unbelievable. Good job. I'd love to read more like this.
2/20/2013 c1 21SnowyBones
Oh but it wasn't crappy at all! It was really good! I thought it was hilarious actually. Poor Booth. I knew that's what he was going to tell her. Anyway this was really good. Hope you write more. :)
Oh but it wasn't crappy at all! It was really good! I thought it was hilarious actually. Poor Booth. I knew that's what he was going to tell her. Anyway this was really good. Hope you write more. :)
2/20/2013 c1 Guest
Not crappy at all! I really enjoyed this :)
Not crappy at all! I really enjoyed this :)
2/20/2013 c1 304FaithinBones
Its not crappy. It's OOC but it's your story and you warned that it would be OOC. I think it's fine and the ending with Booth and Hodgins is cute.
Its not crappy. It's OOC but it's your story and you warned that it would be OOC. I think it's fine and the ending with Booth and Hodgins is cute.
2/20/2013 c1 4Boothiness
I really liked it. I like anything that fills the gap between season six and seven. You should go on with it.
I really liked it. I like anything that fills the gap between season six and seven. You should go on with it.